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Football Love: Part 5 reviews

Posted by Koua
I love it! Also, i love how all your stories are intertwined with each other!
Posted by Dani
LOVE!!! Hope you hurridly write another Part!
Posted by kevin
i think john idk y but i like john more i dont wanna see him become a total dick
Posted by Alejandro
OH MY GAHH this is amazing!!! Love how you intertwine all your stories!!! :D
Posted by N/A
Jake
Posted by Erocis
He needs to be with John!!! It seems to me that John might if taken this bet in the past, but during the time they spent together he truly fell in love with Alex.
Posted by Bob
Even though jake went through what he did in the war from your other story I still believe that Alex should be with John. Now that I have re-read this story I think that jake had his chance and messed up. So definitely John!
Posted by justin
SUICIDE...kidding... im serious dont do that [or i find u and kill u] XD go with john and make jake a friend but protective of Alex like Monica
Posted by Yaw
Alex should be with Jake. Jake made a mistake because he was young and scared. But what John did is unforgiveable!
Posted by Mike
Hurry up! this is not just some porn in words, but an actual, good story. Need more! and why does this remind me of a story from wattpad?
Posted by Eric
Team Jake, umm was John in on the bet I'm a bit confused over whether he is or isn't...
Posted by Dylan
What happened to part 6?
Posted by Keithbc
Oh my God!!!!! John!!! He has to be with John!!!!!!! Sooooo good Iove this story it's my favorite! Can't wai for part 6!!
Posted by Nathaniel
I find myself crying while reading your stories, something very hard to make me do. Keep up the good work, and maybe write another "Undead love" part soon, i enjoy that story along with this one.
Posted by bruece
John!!!!
Posted by Jack
I love your stories! They are my favorite to read and I love how you cross the stories together, genius.
Posted by Anonymous
Jake,definitely cause john is a dick.Alex should sing "Dear John" to John
Posted by Jc
Please don't let it be John. It's really devastating to see if it was jjohn that Alex hated. I hope John would die for forgiveness from Alex. Please it can't be jake who Alex will end up with
Posted by Jordan
I fricken love you Davind Bula! I cannot wait for part six
Posted by lupine
you should do 2 endings 1 for john one for jake
Posted by Jeremiah
Part 6:D
Posted by johnny
JAKE make him go out with jake i wanna see what will happen and what will monica do
Posted by MyDickRubsAgainstYourCrotch
How about.... A THREESOME!!!! :D That way both sides will be appeased lol.
Posted by SensualMuscle
I love John better...
Posted by Dd
Hurry with part 6!!!!
Posted by Tyriek
PLEASE HURRY WITH PART 6
Posted by alex
Awesome story man, can't wait for part six :D
Posted by luckyboi
Plz make a new one soon best thing since the detention series!!!
Posted by Nicholas
Where is part 6?? I've been waiting like forever!!!!I'm in such suspense!!!
Posted by Amareaux
I wanna see him end up with JAKE! I likeJohn but Alex's connection is just too strong and seems to occur naturally. And I think he has deeper feelings for Jake which explains why he's always stuck in a daze in Jake's presence.
Posted by adfasdf
Make part 6 already!!!!!! PLEASE!
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