Posted by John PinPonTable oh my god. You need to finish this story!Other than some gramatical errors I really enjoyed it! Please give it an ending. For me. :)
Posted by jay Amazing hurry up with part two :-D
Posted by Raj Oh ! No pls post the next part soon pls ..... You have made this story also an great one :-) Really really nice . Keep up ur good work dude . Pls post the next part soon pls .....
Posted by Indeed My Friend, Great Story! I love how the first part fed us so much information and details about the two (Alex and John) and how it left us wanting for more.. I really hope this story has a longevity to it. And I suggest that you make this longer than The Soldiers Story.. Because, I can see that this piece of story is worth every chapter that you make.. And it has that essence of sincerity to it.
Posted by scarab awesome story, when i say your name (the author) at the end it told myself, that's why its so good lol
Posted by alejandro That was so good!!!! Really looking forward to seeing Part 2!! I really want to read it now!!!! The ending left me hooked!
Posted by orion great , amazing story, cant ardly wait for the next part, i hope you continue soon.
Posted by Dakman Keep it up this is good shit!!!
Posted by john When will part 2 cum out?
Posted by Charles Loved it :D When is part two comming?
Posted by ethan g part two please!
this story was great.
the only two things i noticed were
1. grammar usage can be improved
2. more sex! the backstory was great but more sex is needed!
other than that it was great!
Posted by Daniel That was amazing ^_^ part 2 please xx
Posted by Frank Great story, can't wait for the second part!
Posted by austin hurry up and write it !! it lol im failing in love with john
Posted by eal hey david when is part 2 going to come out dont leave us hanging hurry please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! we can't wait
Posted by dds Are you finishing this???
Posted by J-dog great story, when is part 2 coming out?
Posted by eal PLEASE POST THE NEXT STORY ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WE CANT WAIT ANY LONGER
Posted by John Still looking forward to part two can't wait
Posted by Ellot When is part 2 coming out plz reply!!
Posted by Alejandro Could you please tell us when part 2 will be released? :)
Posted by Elliot It's been about 2 months PLEASE PUT UP NEW ONE
Posted by Mitch Part 2? You reallyneed to update soon!!!!! Your killing use with the anticipation!!!!!!!!
Posted by Elliot Indeed he is killing us
Posted by John You need to continue this!! You are killing me I want to know what happens
Posted by Ray Y Wow this story was amazing. Well hought out, and an actually plot behind it, rather than the usual rubbish on the site, where people can't wait to get to the sex scene. Cant wait for part 2 :)
Posted by CARLOS OMG CAN YOU PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY. TO TELL YOU THE TRUTH, I HATE READING BUT LOVE READING YOUR STORIES! SO CAN YOU PLEASE FINISH THIS ONE..
Posted by Justin Please post the next part I love ur stories
Posted by Justin P.S. I don't fuckin care about it grammar just finish it PLEASE
Posted by Alejandro Okay, I've starting to lost hope :( At least please reply a presumed date of completion?
Posted by JustAFan You really know how to write an heart racing story. You keep us all on the edge of our seats. Please post the next part soon.
Posted by David Bula Ok guy i know i havent written for a while some stuff came up in my life that i had to deal with. In good news part 2 is under review but it's taking it's time to become public. I just want to apologize for the shortness of part 2 but there will be more to come. Check "Undead Love" and tell me which one i should continue.
Posted by mike OMG,what an awesome story. Please finish this story. I need to know what happens;)
Thursday means spice day and Manuel delivers that when I get my hot Spanish dishes. I have always flirted with the three of them and we all have a friendly relationship. Out of the three of them Manuel was by far the sexiest, he had dark black hair and beautiful brown eyes and the cutest smile I have ever seen...