Football Love reviews

Amazing hurry up with part two :-D

That was so good!!!! Really looking forward to seeing Part 2!! I really want to read it now!!!! The ending left me hooked!

great , amazing story, cant ardly wait for the next part, i hope you continue soon.

Keep it up this is good shit!!!

When will part 2 cum out?

Loved it :D When is part two comming?

That was amazing ^_^ part 2 please xx

hurry up and write it !! it lol im failing in love with john

hey david when is part 2 going to come out dont leave us hanging hurry please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! we can't wait

Are you finishing this???

great story, when is part 2 coming out?

Still looking forward to part two can't wait

Part 2? You reallyneed to update soon!!!!! Your killing use with the anticipation!!!!!!!!

You need to continue this!! You are killing me I want to know what happens

OMG CAN YOU PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY. TO TELL YOU THE TRUTH, I HATE READING BUT LOVE READING YOUR STORIES! SO CAN YOU PLEASE FINISH THIS ONE..

P.S. I don't fuckin care about it grammar just finish it PLEASE

Ok guy i know i havent written for a while some stuff came up in my life that i had to deal with. In good news part 2 is under review but it's taking it's time to become public. I just want to apologize for the shortness of part 2 but there will be more to come. Check "Undead Love" and tell me which one i should continue.

What?! Coming soon?! Start writing right now! Just... Ditch everything and start to write!

Great story so far but the missing punctuation tends to break the reader's flow and sometimes doesn't make sense. I had to continually go back and re-read sentences. Also you grossly overuse the word "just".