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Posted by jack
It was ok. Simple story but should have had more detail to it. Wasn't enough description for my liking.
Try seperating the actual speaking text from the story as well.
Posted by GayPhreak
The spoken words need to be separated from actions. There were a lot of places where actions were in quotes. Also, it develops too quickly, out of nowhere one asks the other if he's experimented. Just my opinion.
Posted by Jankyn
You get an A- for effort. Ur storie was rather too predictable. There was no sexdrama, no conflict or central tension. From 1 writer 2 another. BREW the Drama in ur next story, thicken the plot and give us a dick flogging, cock screwing, cum busting story. With luv.
Posted by Jankyn
Oh! Write 2 me if u want to exchange stories, i do it wit other writers it helps.
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