Posted by GlenAllen You should definitely continue this story! It's so captivating, I want to know more.
Posted by youwishyouknew I want to read more...
Posted by connor me too
Posted by Bill Bob awesome please continue the chapters
Posted by Bryan c: That was an amazing story! Please please please continue! :D now dont shroud the next chapters with to much sex cause then it will lose its feel. But great work! Cant wait for the next!
Posted by Jake I got it in the works guys, just be patient. I want it to be as detailed as possible and not rushed, but you know how life goes. I will continue it, just bear with me.
Posted by Carl Brilliant introduction. I cannot wait for the rest of the story. Please keep writing.
Posted by Ezra Awsome begining,pls don't stop writing.
Posted by ken
Forever Midnight you have class... and talant... keep writing you are gifted
Posted by Nick WoW one f da mst xcitin nd thrilin nd kinda spooky story hehe..i mean 4 me.
Aniws am eagerli waitn on u nd ope dat u'l post da stry soon coz patience s nt a virtue 4 mst f us..haha
we're waitin..
Nd ya totli agre wit BRIAN C..
Posted by Johnson This story really leaves us in suspense! Well it's wat makes it all cool. I do hope you're having great plans for a part 2 though... Will love to read it
Posted by peter Gr8 story mate but I think ur story line is a bit to solatary but I'm referin to the lack of sex but all I can say its missing sumting mate I hope u decide rto loAd part two I usaully don't rate stories but I did urs cos I really liked it a hell of a lot awesum
This is a story of one man adventures in Paradise. Read the tale of Jeff and his insatiable lust for men as he travels to new places filled with exotic men, rituals and beautiful scenery. Please note none of these places actually exist...