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High School Heartache Part 2 reviews

Posted by me
i'm not sure if i like it, you would have to write nex part soon and i'll tell ya.
Posted by Jon
I liked it alot, Im very into alot of emotion and some sex too get it started. You should continue on. Keep the whole "hanging on edge" concept, makes me want to know who was talking, I'm leaving an open mind to it, but deep down I bat everyone who reads it knows its gona b that one guy lmfao. AND I JUST READ THE STORY... o its TYLER!
Posted by ben
keep going
Posted by Kat
So far so good, good beginning and excellent follow up, the makings of a good story. No doubt the story line will begin to come through in the sense that is this a story about Ethan's activities, the school or Ethan and Tyler. I guess that by the ending of this story, it's Tyler that has just walked in and things develop from there. Look forward to you next installment!
Posted by martha
I like it keep it up.
Posted by kcm
WOW!!!! This is a way cool story. Pretty intense. OK now you really have my attention. I am ready for more. This was really amazing.
Posted by Charles
nice story, like it alot
Posted by Scott
Thanks for the reviews guys, AND THE ADVICE! :-D!
Posted by shawn
hey i thouhgt it was asom so keep it up bud!!
Posted by hector
this story is great and u should write the next part to it
Posted by Matt
Enjoyed the Story Would love to see a part where Tyler and Ethan confront one another again Great story sometimes a little too fast moving but was very well Written
Posted by Screaminghawk Santanas
no I want more////////??????
Posted by Madeline
I think it was pretty good. Better than the first one. I like your jumping technique. Some of these stories are just sex and boring crap your's are really good. Keep em coming.
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Posted by Brett
OK I probably wouldn't have sent the Tyler off to jail, BUT this is still pretty good. Skipping time is good for a website like this, you don't want to bore people. And once again I loved how the way you ended this part.
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