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High School Heartache Part 3 reviews

Posted by Ken
That was an excellent piece. It is great. Please continue.
Posted by ivan buffalo
damn ur going to end his life that quick? there has to be more
Posted by Mikey
Hey buddy! Looks like we're both back. Kind of interesting how one of my biggest fans here has blossomed into his own by sharing his own work. Your work seemed deep, almost personal. You have a knack for this man. Looking fwd to part 4. Have to wonder if our time away has done anything to our fan base. I guess when Fire in the Firehouse pt 20 is up we'll see. keep up the good work and don't keep us in the dark too long for part 4!
Posted by Screaminghawk Santanas
not sure i'm a big fan of this one but there are a bunch of ways it can go so i'll have to see the next one..
Posted by Mewithoutyou
Well written. But please continue this story. You cant end it like that. Throw in another twist. Make a different outlook of the kid. This is what i think.
Posted by willy
dude you seriously half to write more your a amazing writer
Posted by juan
i dont like the fact that you made him so weak...he has no self value nd yea he's been threw some shit but i think he woulda been ok with out all the dramatics
Posted by Brett
You know exactly how I want it.
Posted by ngaja
hurry up and rite the nxt one plz plz plz iam obseesed with them
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