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High School Heartache reviews

Posted by Martha Lane
I liked the story I hope you will continue with it.
Posted by mike
What happens next? I think you should continue, your story is really interesting and I want to know what's Tyler's problem.
Posted by Ken
Great start. Yes please keep going with this story. I like!!!!!!
Posted by ML3
nice plot and twist of story line...keep writing , i love it.
Posted by shawn
please continue this story and i believe ur the first one i actually sent a msg to i think it would be intersting to learn y tyler did that
Posted by Athan
This is the start of a really great story! I was very suprised when he was KO'd. I'll be waiting for your next update.
Posted by biguy
you gotta keep going the story seems really interesting don't leave us hanging.
Posted by dwc
Very interesting...seems to be a good one so please continue...
Posted by Nicky
Hi.You might think I am being dumb,but what you wrote really made me feel sad.Everyone has to have a sexual organ.That is just a part of life.I know the hunger for another guy can be a confuseing emotional issue.Some guys want sex,and some of us are a bit afraid of it.But what you wrote made me feel really sad for you.Someone beating you up just because you think he is sexy hurt me.I have been there,and I DO understand.That hurt me too,and made me afraid to trust some really nice people,who wanted to be my friend..
Posted by axel
that's hot. go on with the story.
Posted by schuurman
It's a good story I hope it'll turn into a good ending or continuing story
Posted by Marcus
That was pretty damn hot, and it got me hard. Please don't leave us hanging, and just blow the story off. We want to see more and I'm hoping that you will give it to us.
Posted by Ala mandalock
oh my god that was awful. as a closet person still trying to figure out what he truely is, i find myshelf horrified by what happened to ethan.
Posted by j
it is awsome. continue please
Posted by Cjm
I need more info!!!!! this is not even for a turn on. This was like a good book you couldn't stop reading!!!!!
Posted by mike
wasent bad needs another
Posted by Don
This was a Hot story I hope it can continue
Posted by justin
i want to kno what happened
Posted by Matt
PLEASE FINISH THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT! i love it so much im actually giving a review. i usually never do. SO PLEASE continue!!!
Posted by Screaminghawk Santanas
what the ??? not cool your good but hey thats like watching a good move and then it freezes up..
Posted by anil
I really loved the story very much and wanna know what happens next so please continue it further.
Posted by mark
what the fuck happens next?
Posted by david
I would like to read more of your stories your stories have been the only ones that I have completely read I would like to read more
Posted by kyle
very very interesting looking forward to the continuence
Posted by jk
what was this about?
Posted by Bob
Really Good Keep on keeping on!
Posted by wow500
I don tknow if i like it yet but i really REALLY want to know what happens next..
Posted by matt
thought it was really gud i hope u keep d story goin i really liked it
Posted by Alex
i liked it, it really peeked my interest and i'd like you to continue, and what i want to happen is for ethen to find out what the hell was up
Posted by willy
you HALF to make a new one please lol i need 2 know y tyler did wht he did
Posted by andy
i like this story. it has great potential and you seem to know how to write. so i hope you keep this story going.
Posted by Brett
This is truly amazing. This is the type of stuff that needs to be on here all the time. I have a few stories in mind that I want to write and it would go something like this. I love how this ended, exactly how I want my story to start.
Posted by Chris
I loved it and I want to hear more!
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