Posted by edmund It's good to read a gay story with a real plot. Keep it going! ;-)
Posted by Martha Lane I liked the story I hope you will continue with it.
Posted by Jordan It was really good i want more
Posted by mike What happens next? I think you should continue, your story is really interesting and I want to know what's Tyler's problem.
Posted by Nick F*CK YES KEEP GOIN!!!! the has to be the best start to an awsome story plot that ive heard in almost FOREVER!!! please kepp going!!!!
Posted by Scott Benson Thanks for the positive feed back guys! I'm glad you all liked it! I will begin on Part 2 then soon! :-P!
Scott
Posted by Mikey Scott, Excellent start. This site has needed some new blood with a passion for writing. So many stories have become the same ol recycled shit. And there's one that tells the same type over and over. This built fast, almost too fast, but you closed the gaps before ending it. Good choice. Reminds me, if you will, the series premiere of Desperate Housewives. That show, until the mystery was put forth was a tiny bit cliche. But, like the show, you added a twist. Leaving your readers thristy for more. That's always great to do, cliffhangers. Leave them hungry for the next part. I have to say your story was, although a bit short, a great way to reel us in! When I take a brief hiatus, good to know the torch will be passed to at least one new writer with style all his own. But then again, I might have to pull double duty now. Can't have ya show me up too much. ;)
Posted by andrew please continue...It's very well started. Thanks.
Posted by Ken Great start. Yes please keep going with this story. I like!!!!!!
Posted by ML3 nice plot and twist of story line...keep writing , i love it.
Posted by shawn please continue this story and i believe ur the first one i actually sent a msg to i think it would be intersting to learn y tyler did that
Posted by Athan This is the start of a really great story! I was very suprised when he was KO'd. I'll be waiting for your next update.
Posted by biguy you gotta keep going the story seems really interesting don't leave us hanging.
Posted by dwc Very interesting...seems to be a good one so please continue...
Posted by ME u gotta keep writing. its good so pld keep going.
Posted by Nicky Hi.You might think I am being dumb,but what you wrote really made me feel sad.Everyone has to have a sexual organ.That is just a part of life.I know the hunger for another guy can be a confuseing emotional issue.Some guys want sex,and some of us are a bit afraid of it.But what you wrote made me feel really sad for you.Someone beating you up just because you think he is sexy hurt me.I have been there,and I DO understand.That hurt me too,and made me afraid to trust some really nice people,who wanted to be my friend..
Posted by Aliano I really like this story, Very unexpected plot!
You gotta keep going with it.
Posted by axel that's hot. go on with the story.
Posted by schuurman It's a good story I hope it'll turn into a good ending or continuing story
Posted by Marcus That was pretty damn hot, and it got me hard. Please don't leave us hanging, and just blow the story off. We want to see more and I'm hoping that you will give it to us.
Posted by Ala mandalock oh my god that was awful. as a closet person still trying to figure out what he truely is, i find myshelf horrified by what happened to ethan.
Posted by j it is awsome. continue please
Posted by Dona hi scott, graet twist, what happened to Ethan, could u please write the next part of the story as soon as possible,,, plz. u cant wait
Posted by harvey i like it so far but i think its going a bit too fast. try slowing the plot down a little and making it longer by adding more description with things. seperate the speaking text with the normal text with a couple of lines, makes it easier to read. other than that, its good
Posted by Cjm I need more info!!!!! this is not even for a turn on. This was like a good book you couldn't stop reading!!!!!
Posted by Brad you definitely can't leave us hanging like that....If I could make a suggestion of him recovering and then getting some serious revenge on that guy....I know what it's like to get the crap beat out of you by some homophobic prick....so I'd like to see something really bad happen to tyler....like maybe he could get hit by a bus or something...but please finish the story.
Posted by mike wasent bad needs another
Posted by Don This was a Hot story I hope it can continue
Posted by justin i want to kno what happened
Posted by Matt PLEASE FINISH THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT! i love it so much im actually giving a review. i usually never do. SO PLEASE continue!!!
Posted by Screaminghawk Santanas what the ??? not cool your good but hey thats like watching a good move and then it freezes up..
Posted by jj Please continue! Something similar happened to me in real life and I would like to see how you continue this! It makes me hard reminding me of the gorgeous german I met hitch-hiking and what happened. If you continue, I would be happy to recount my story to you privately!
Posted by anil I really loved the story very much and wanna know what happens next so please continue it further.
Posted by mark what the fuck happens next?
Posted by david I would like to read more of your stories your stories have been the only ones that I have completely read I would like to read more
Posted by thomas KEEP WRITING!!!! I WANT TO KNOW WHY TYLER DID IT! Is he abused because he is gay?
Posted by kyle very very interesting looking forward to the continuence
Posted by jk what was this about?
Posted by Bob Really Good Keep on keeping on!
Posted by wow500 I don tknow if i like it yet but i really REALLY want to know what happens next..
Posted by matt thought it was really gud i hope u keep d story goin i really liked it
Posted by Alex i liked it, it really peeked my interest and i'd like you to continue, and what i want to happen is for ethen to find out what the hell was up
Posted by willy you HALF to make a new one please lol i need 2 know y tyler did wht he did
Posted by andy i like this story. it has great potential and you seem to know how to write. so i hope you keep this story going.
Posted by bro very intriguing story
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