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Posted by Sebastien
Implausible plot.
Too too many runon sentences.
So Hitesh gives the narrator a blow-job right in the middle of class, but the narrator has "to kiss him under the guise of getting something from his bag"? What is that all about?
There are a few good descriptions, but otherwise, needs a lot of work.
Posted by Jai D.
Hi dear, thanks for the review I will try to get better with these next time :)
as for Hitesh giving blowjob right in the class, he was hiding under the desk while narrator kissing under guise of getting something from bag 'cause it was right up in classroom... I hope I am clear here, the desk would hide Hitesh from sight of anyone in class but the bench partner who was narrator himself.
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