Posted by Web Cam Haha. This story was so bad. i actually wish I hadn't written it. The next one will be better I promise! :)
Posted by Ray Hey Web Cam, don't beat yourself up. This was still a great read. And your time and effort is clearly shown. I happily read it through in one go and can't wait to read your next story! Thanks!
Posted by Web Cam Thank you Ray that means a lot :). I know I can do better though, I didn't like this story, and neither did many other people I don't think, but it is what it is and it's not terrible I suppose. I have some new stories lined up for the near future, and there has been another story posted since this one ended called "Short Term Relationship" which I feel is MUCH better than this. I'd love it if you checked it out, if you do, be sure to let me know what you thought of it. Thanks for your comment, it's good to know that you enjoyed reading this. :) Thank you!
"Oh fuck, you’re so tight..” Kyle panted as he started to thrust into Jack. He reached a hand down and started to stroke Jack’s cock in time with his thrusts, making him groan in pleasure...
Jimmy' asshole was a mixture of pain and pleasure, the two becoming intertwined together, indistinguishable as the massive cock pounded in and out of him!...