Posted by Mike A really boring story - so like many others on here - with a totally predictable story line - 2 guys meet; get it on; shag each other silly; bye - come on - if you're gonna write stories make them interesting - give them well defined characters and add some twists to the story line - otherwise - DON'T BOTHER!!
Posted by todd thank you. i needed to cum this morining and this story pushed me over the edge. great job. and please keep it coming. have fun. thanks again. toddtx25@msn.com
Posted by Drake747 Dude this story would've been better if you have put much more detail to every scene to it. This story is kinda short. But i do love the fact that you didn't care your cash was gone.. I wish I was that guy! I would've made some fun AND some cash! lol
Posted by Patrick J Well, this was an okay story. Good sex scene, but bad descriptions. Better luck next time...
Posted by Max its a good story. i like it very much but i think u should give more decription of the scene. but whatever it is it make me cum. so i want to read more of ur story and waiting for more..........
Posted by Jamel Madison i would really love to turn this into a book ... i think it has ahmazing potential i absolutely loved it and although it is unusual as a plot line for a story i would like to ask you if i could take this and turn it into a full length book all 100+ pages of its glory PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write back .. anything made of it i will give you a percentage of
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