Posted by John Gatewood I think this story didn't have enough detail. You could put more feeling into it. Like explain how it felt to get fucked for the first time. Did you scream? Did it hurt? etc. Put some more excitement into your story. What the fuck is he makes cat noises? You knew he was gay so you dress in pajamas. Need better spelling. Tell us your thought on whats happen during the sex. Do this and you stories will be better then those Detention Story
Posted by Jjed Dutton Well at least its a bit different. Too many of these stories are the same. It's a true story. No it didn't hurt and I didn't scream. Anyway the spelling is English (UK) and its ok.
Posted by wardell Yeah Jjed I thought your story was a turn on. The dude that needs to learn how to spell is the Nathan Dad guy. Hell no it didnt hurt because you wanted it to be there. Makes sense to me. Keep writing. I like what you have to say.
