Posted by John Slater Fritz, What a great begining, for a first time I would say you have a great future in this genre. I can't wait for you submit a chapter in the adventures of Corey. Well done. JohnSl
Posted by Fritz John, thank you for the kind review. Chapter 2 is posted
Your story is a total turn-on. I can hardly wait for the additional chapters you promised about Corey. I, like you, generally prefer older (more my age) guys; but love is so rare, who are we to question when it cums along? Just wish I could have had a teacher/coach so wonderful when I was Corey's age.
Posted by David Green Fritz for your first time out, you did an absolutely wonderful job! This story had all the required elements; love, drama and great sex. When can we expect chapter 2?
David G.
Posted by Manolo Chico David told me that your stories were great, so I read them all in one full swoop. They are great and I hope that you will continue to post your stories here for all to read. Congratulations
Posted by manspurt Your story was damn good.I am bi-curious and have not touched another man. Your story got me hot. I think I want to suck a beautiful cock. Thanks for turning me on.
Posted by RICHARD BARBER Like your stories but people are confusing your stories with the stories I have been posting called,
ADVENTURES OF COREY, PARTS 1 AND 2. I have more to post but have stoped for now because of the confusion. I think I am getting email about your stories. Boy, this Corey, sure gets around. Ha Ha. He is such a slut. Keep up the good work and keep the memory of Corey going. Richard Barber, Author
Posted by Ernie This is one hot fucking story. Perhaps Coach has found someone to love for life. Very tender story and well written
Posted by Ralph Good story i love it, i wish i coulde find someone that age for sexual pleaser. It got me very HOT.
Posted by mykl starr Allright. I stumbled unto your story and now i am hooked. thanks for the entertainment.
Posted by omar It was a great story, well written and entertaining, but the fact that the kid was 14yrs was a bit of a turn off.
Posted by albsexy MMMMM that was good must read the next one sooner rather than later thanks