Posted by d_201 This just gets better and better. Love it and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Please don't worry about punctuation and grammar. I haven't noticed many mistakes and agree that the sex scenes should not dominate this story. Since I'm a hopeless romantic, I love it this way.
Posted by David Green Fritz punctuation and grammar be damned!!! You just keep writing. I, like you and many of your readers, am also a hopeless romantic. But I just can't get the romance part down when I write like you do. In any case, your stories are wonderfully hot, sweet and very, very romantic. You're a winner!
David G.
Posted by whisper You are very, very sensual! My body responded to your words in a warm and sensual manner. My manhood hardening, wet with precum. I could not help but taste myself....I hope to hear more or your words
Posted by whisper You are very, very sensual! My body responded to your words in a warm and sensual manner. My manhood hardening, wet with precum. I could not help but taste myself....I hope to hear more or your words
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Dave rubbed Gary’s stomach, and actually felt his friend moving inside the boy! Dave pushed against the hunks flat belly, and heard Drew sigh with the added tightness!