Posted by Najee J. This didn't even make me hard. This sucked big time.
Posted by Athan It seems like you're jumping around quite a bit in the story. I like the dynamics, I can relate to the story. But I suggest a little more detail for future works.
Posted by me cool if this is real...
but if you invented it, you suck :P
Posted by Chuck Thanks for some of the critique. It was a real story, all of my adventures here will be all real.
Posted by Romeo This story is bad. No one wants to hear a story about some one with a small dick.
Posted by bob wow i like that sweet its so nice
I reached out and took a pair of silken balls in each hand, gently rolling their tender nuggets between fingers and thumbs. The heat of their passion was evident as it radiated from their swollen, sperm filled pods to the tips of my groping digits. There was an unmistakable fire raging within these delightfully submissive young men...