I thought I was just curious, but ended up turning into a little whore reviews

It seems like you're jumping around quite a bit in the story. I like the dynamics, I can relate to the story. But I suggest a little more detail for future works.

Thanks for some of the critique. It was a real story, all of my adventures here will be all real.

This story is bad. No one wants to hear a story about some one with a small dick.

wow i like that sweet its so nice