Posted by Romeo I hope chapter 2 is much longer. This chapter is way to short.
You could have told the whole story in 1 chapter. Even with 1 chapter, it didn't seem like the story would be long.
Posted by Syd I should remember that take em to the garage ask if i do this promise you wont get mad and then suck his dick remember that
Posted by Boy Feet Lover ;) Honestly, not a bad story for your first one. I really like it, and cant wait to read the other half. Ill be checking for it.. ;)
Posted by curran that was cool and i liked it.im 12 and bi if you can send me a message. curranbug@gmail.com