Posted by Adan Estel This is a great story, i like your work. Please email me back, i wanna know more about the Kruzung, I love the story around him.
Posted by Ivan Like dis story keep it going gots me interested
Posted by Chris Love this story can't wait to read more.
Posted by Jeremiah I AM LOVEING DIS STORY. IT HAS ME INTERSETED AND WANTING 2 HEAR MORE
Posted by wow500 This story is F'n SWEAT. Wheres the rest, hurry. I have to read more. But take your time, savor the art you're producing!
Posted by brandon i need to know what happens next!
Posted by Aaron Cliff hanger, please please write more. It's an awesome story.
Posted by nick blake dude great story cant wait for the next part please wright more asap
Posted by joe when are you going to finish...?!?!!? its been about a month and a half since i read this and i'm dying for the next part!
Posted by Jacen Solo Chris you are a god! Dude seriously write a book... When your done with this series... But your stories are awesome. Twilight better watch out... There's new vamp stories on the rise.
Posted by johnny what the hell man where is the next part i've been waiting for a couple of months now!
Posted by Joel The storie is great so far keep it up
Posted by j hurry up and make the next one
Posted by Romeo I like this series! Is much better than your other stories.
This can be the beginning of a good series. Give us more of the story, a cescription of the characters, and a drama. I think a drama to overcome is the inportants of the series.
We can't wait for the next chapter! Come on with it.
Posted by Zack Dude, you better finish this story!!!!! or i'll kick your butt from here to the moon! PLease Please Please Please, it's really really really really good!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by James Dude write the sequal to this it is pretty good and very interesting and I really gate waiting a ling time for things to get published
Posted by James Dude write the sequal to this it is pretty good and very interesting and I really gate waiting a ling time for things to get published
Posted by James Dude write the sequal to this it is pretty good and very interesting and I really gate waiting a ling time for things to get published
Posted by sean this was fucking cool u should make more parts
Posted by albert Strange! Strange for th?s day and age but d?ffrent story. Guess ?s that movement!
Posted by EMILIO wheres the rest?
Posted by emilio wtf wheres the rest its so interesting come on more please
Posted by Jim Barnes Very interesting story. I enjoyed reading it. Full of suspense and mystery. I like that.