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Posted by David Green
Fritz what a wonderful piece of erotic fiction and so quickly on the heels of your Corey series too! I wish I had half the talent for story telling!
David G.
Posted by Manolo Chico
You're really a talented story teller. I loved your story even though it is not porn. Nice for a change!
Posted by Mike
Great Story! Really enjoyed the the way you set the mood for the whole story. keep up the excellent work.
Mike
Posted by jack
I usually dive right into the action parts but your story was really erotic..I could really feel the setting you set as if I was there in the light of the fireplace...I bet you are a great writer in many respects other than erotic fiction...lol.
Posted by Chris
Fritz-
Good story. How long have you been writing? And if you say not long, then you're a damn lie. You write as if "classicly trained". If I know what that means. I haven't read any of your other works. I will now. Good way to play with the darkness. The search for love before time runs out. The time running out being the darkness. Well that is my idea on it anyways. The characters all seemed real except the narrarator. He seemed just there. Not described but the story couldn't have worked without him. Well it could but you know. I don't know if this is erotic or not. Honestly, I'm not much for labeling. Keep writing and experience with more passion between the characters.
Much respect,
Chris
Posted by mark
brilliant peice of work! loved the twist at the end!
Posted by Michael Booker
Really good story
Posted by john
I really loved your story. It kept me going. It felt so real. Thank you so much for sharing.
Posted by adeel
excellent
Posted by adeel
This was weird, this exact thing happened to me!
Posted by MooMooManWhore
So scrumteous!
Posted by bill
Wow, what a twist.... doesn't start out to be dark... good job.
Posted by Asladyhot
WOW~~jthe ending was such a surprise but I enjoyed the story.
Posted by available upon request
great story! emotions are soo intense that I can feel it from just reading the story... the beginning and endings are conventional presentation but the emotions are excellently presented. It can be a good movie.. the drama is similar to that of the broke back mountain..
Posted by Afzal
Good story but too much description. Sometimes it was boring. So try to write smthing with less description. And it was a real good job.
Posted by Romeo
Great story!
I like how interpret being alone with the darkness and finding love with the light.
Didn't really like the ending but it was a twister. Never seen it coming.
Posted by Don Lindsay
Corey is the true name of a younge man I met at a simaler age and expierienced a very simaler love for many years. having read all your stories I throughly enjoyed them all.I enjoyed seeing the improvemets evolve and your descriptions of your feelings as they were very similar to mine.I still enjoy my friendship with Corey to this my 80th year please keep writing more Don
Posted by Ralph Watkins
I have finished both of your stories I am hoping to see more about Sam n Corey the story line was plausable n probably truer than one may believe. This last one is not my cup of tea I see it not as the dreaming of a writer but the thoughts of a mentally deranged person.
I believe your writing style is good the story about Corey is well thought out even without the sex it would be a nice story. All in all I was impressed.
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