Posted by jack wat. the. hell.....that just ruined it totally
Posted by jamahl jack you r mistaken this is going to be one of the best stories this site has ever seen and please keep on writing a series to this story and you should get some tips from the person who is writing love bit its about werewolves its a very good story and might i add u have potental
Posted by jason rivers I have to say I didn't c this coming, but that's a good thing. I think u should take more time on it n make each segmant longer. I think u should go deeper in the vampire aspect n expolre Thier love more I feel that b loves Jason but it's not mutal. I can't wait to c how u develop this story it has potential.
Posted by cominhome o wtf its just like love bite but with vamps
Posted by cominhome o wtf its just like love bite but with vamps, but love bite is awsome
Posted by TERRY MURPHY it had a very strange twist of events, i am going to be surprised to see how this turns out since we are i thinnk talking vampires. still need to describe looks and etc more. thanks for the great start to the story
Posted by Colin it is a change from the norm, thanks and don't you dare think of stopping it now. Keep it cummin.
Posted by Jacen Solo Omg dude vampires and gay love... Awesome! Wow I've never seen violence or vampires on thois site before. Nice work dude. Give us more!
Posted by wc It was going so well until Braden turned into a vampire lol! It's still good but it would have been better to keep it realistic :)