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J. and B: The Aftermath of The Kiss reviews

Posted by jack
wat. the. hell.....that just ruined it totally
Posted by jamahl
jack you r mistaken this is going to be one of the best stories this site has ever seen and please keep on writing a series to this story and you should get some tips from the person who is writing love bit its about werewolves its a very good story and might i add u have potental
Posted by jason rivers
I have to say I didn't c this coming, but that's a good thing. I think u should take more time on it n make each segmant longer. I think u should go deeper in the vampire aspect n expolre Thier love more I feel that b loves Jason but it's not mutal. I can't wait to c how u develop this story it has potential.
Posted by cominhome
o wtf its just like love bite but with vamps
Posted by cominhome
o wtf its just like love bite but with vamps, but love bite is awsome
Posted by TERRY MURPHY
it had a very strange twist of events, i am going to be surprised to see how this turns out since we are i thinnk talking vampires. still need to describe looks and etc more. thanks for the great start to the story
Posted by Colin
it is a change from the norm, thanks and don't you dare think of stopping it now. Keep it cummin.
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