Posted by Teddy beautiful! i love your stories so much, glad you're writing again :D
cant wait for the next part & i really hope jack and kyle are gonna stay together
Posted by Romeo Nice story!
Jack and Kyle needs a real friend they can talk to, not one who will hit on them. A real friend will help you in a time of need and not make things more complicated. It looks like your making this series more complicated instead of bringing it to a conclusion.
We still need to know more about Kyle background. I hope his friend Hailley can help him without hitting on him. There were no physical attraction between Kyle and Hailley so don't make there to be one.
If Josh is going to hit on Jack than he's not the one for Jack to talk to and it still leaves Jack with a friend to talk to. Don't make a straight man turn out to be gay or bi. Josh was a good friend before so keep him as one.
May be Kyle and Jack can go on vacation where they meet a couple in a simular situation that can help them and vice versa. Sometimes getting away from a problem can lead to an answer.
Keep writing. They still need a friend to talk to. One without a hidden agenda.
Posted by Ellie Hey, really love the story, when will the next one be out? :)
Posted by Kohhicllick Love it so far but this cheating over and over again is annoying :(
Posted by Corey ii lOve ur stOriies they r sO gOOd!!!! Please wriite agaiin ii hOpe
that jack ends up wiith jOsh! :)
Posted by sky Damnnn you should make a guy version of the L word :p
Posted by Ivan b Please continue the story
Posted by Daniel Marshall I really enjoy this story. Kyle and Jack may be confused about how they feel, but we all know that in the end Jack and Kyle will be once more. I really love this story, and i hope u continue to write it.
Posted by Charlie I love your Jack and Kyle series! I just had to let you know. I started reading them on the Aphrodisiac droid app and I loved them so much that when I wasn't able to find anything past 9 I took to the web with crossed fingers just hoping to find more. Thankfully I found parts 10 and 11. I know you said you think you are about done but I gotta tell you I would loveee to hear more!!! I wish this tale was in novel form (love all the juicy details – you sure know how to spin a story Mr.) I don’t know why but I almost feel a connection to these two guys and I really hope everything works out for them in the end... if it does I would adore hearing how it turns out! However, if it doesn’t work out for them then I am glad you stopped with them still together! Anyways thank you for this great story. I will keep my fingers crossed for more someday…