Posted by Jacob. You should keep making them , like differemt stories but with jack and kyle (:
Posted by Ash Amazing! It's just so awesome! (:
I LOVE IT x
Posted by Shaun Keep using jack and kyle, as evry1 has fallen in love with them and we dont want there story 2 end. Wat happened to max and will he try to get even. Plz continue
Posted by Ryan please please please continue!
Posted by Daniel u should keep making the story
but max being a bad guy basically he is making him fall for him more and more and making him cheat and stuff like that
Posted by wow500 you have an unbelieveable ability. please keep writing, ur stories r so powerful and filled with emotions. please don't stop this series just yet. bring max back with a vengence, or make josh an unexpected threat. in fact in the first story you stated that kyle didn;t like to talk about his past so you could even do a spin off series of kyles untold story. but even if u do stop the series here, please keep writing u have such passion in every story please keep that going.
Posted by havoc keep the story going only have max fall for jack, of josh for kyle. i luv ur stories by the way.
Posted by Alex ok
well umm Kyle needs to break it off with max but make it kinda spicy with like max kinda trying to get him n bed while hes tryin to break it off.
Don't allow them to have sex tho cause that's gonna make me mad lol but u doing GREAT soo far and i love it just worry to write the next 1 cause im dyin to find out ok.
Posted by caryn miller i think that you should definatly keep the stories up but have it were max jack and kyle somehow end up in a steamy threesome but then jack and kyle dont no how to get rid of max and max gets real pissed
Posted by rahil hi jake.......
i loved this series..... every good thing must come to an end. Stories especially have a knack to go boring with too many chapters.......
Besides be original in ur ideas...... Writing here is more of what you feel rather than filling this site with raw hardcore sex stories..... so keep coming what u want the world to know rather than portraying other's ideas.... And just to inform you, read the COOL FOOLS series by sebastian penn... great work there..... SORRY NO OFFENCES MEANT IN ANY WAY
Posted by Lee 1746 The Story Has been great so far but it isn't fin,
what has happend to max did kile break up with him?
or was there a fight with the to of them, there
maney's to go with this story yet. I give your story a 10
Posted by Romeo I like this series but you left out a lot of things. Why did Kyle leave home? Did Kyle break-up with Max? Does Josh have more than friendship with Jack and where did he come from because he just appear from no where? You can't stop this series because there's a lot of things missing.
Keep writing, just read your stories first bo see what you're leaving out before you post them.
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