Posted by jM It was a good story, just try to make it the second one longer, and maybe don't end with sex. Your the first person in a while that has written a story plot. That's rreally good, ill keep reading your stories.
Posted by Daniel Roberts Hey Dave I thought this was one of the best stories I've ever read. I loved it, I counldnt stop reading it because I wanted to know what happened next. Fabulous Job, I hope you work more on this I'd like to read more of your work. Sincerely,
Daniel
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