Posted by Leo I love this story. You have a plot which a lot of these stories don't so. The guys having sex actually makes sense.
Posted by Ken Good story. Interesting subject. Looking forward to the next part and beyond.
Posted by Mike This would have been a really great story had it not been for the opening paragraph - what was the point of it? To use a phrase "get over yourself"!! I would have rated it 9 or 10 but because of the opening paragraph which ruined the story for me I will give you a 5.
Posted by Jerry Hutchens great thank you