Posted by Lisa When you are writing the dialouge, you should break it up, and put what they are saying in quotes", this makes it easier to read
Posted by kofhe i love it ,want to know what happens next.
Posted by Paul The story was very good better than last time well done I really enjoy it.:)
Ravi has gay room mates but he is not affected until he finds out his liking to get his ass drilled till he fucks his teacher. he finds out that he is a natural bitch and cant wait to tell his room mates and then have their cocks as well...
Many lengthy chapters: Robin begins to panic under the stress of not having Bart. Tyler's strange mood swings heavily affect Bart. The plot thickens...