Posted by Mike A pretty boring story - nothing special - lacks detail about the characters and also lacks a real storyline - its like too many stories on here: two guys meet, they don't know each other, they fuck - end of!!! Try to engage us more in what you're writing by giving us rounded believable characters and a more well thought out storyline.
Posted by Carpenter Oh, I like this story aloth
Posted by David This story was fucking hot!!! I enjoyed it so much I read it again and was more turned on than the first time I read it. I hope you continue to write.