Louser II

(Part 1 from 1. Fiction.)

So, the next day (or the same day, however you put days in perspective) I woke up to my cousin rushing throughout the house.

“I’m late for work, ill see you at ch later tonight, we need to talk.” She said as she grabbed her keys and was gone. I laid in the bed for a while like I always do, before I got up and started my day. After breakfast and bathroom routine, I played a few games on various systems before I chose to head over to Billy’s. I didn’t have to work that day so there was no real reason to go on that side of town (the office where I worked was located near that area), except to see Lou. When I finally got through all the usual traffic, I realized I didn’t know where Lou lived, so instead I paid a visit to Billy’s hoping I would see him there. When I pulled up to Billy’s house I noticed that his car wasn’t there, but in place of it, Jeal’s car was. I knocked on the door expecting Jello to answer, but instead Billy did.

“What you doing over here?” Billy asked me.

“Hello to you to, Billy.” I replied.

“Sorry man, I’m just a little on edge after…” Billy stopped.

“After? Dude what happen last night?” I asked. Billy dropped his head and went back inside, to which I followed. “What happen man, is everything alright?” I questioned again.

“Uhh man, its nothing like that, its just Nick was stalking Jeal again and she got in a fight with that bitch that rides his dick.” Billy stated. “She’s using my car, that’s why I have hers if you were guessing, I’m so tired we stayed up all night.”

“Oh fuck man, drama.” I said.

“So yeah, why are you over here again.” He asked me.

“Umm, I, umm, came over to see if you’ve seen Jeremy around.” I half lied.

“Nah, he’s been ghost ever since he started playing WoW.” He said.

“Yeah, I haven’t spoken to him in so long” I said. Jeremy happens to be my best friend that I known for 2 years then, but have not spoken to since WoW.

“Weren’t you too like butt buddies? You should know were he is.” He joked and I laughed. We were that close, I did crush on him for a while, and he knew it but nothing ever came of it.

“Well I guess ill get out of your hair, or what’s left of it.” I said as Billy half laughed and rubbed his military shaved head.

I got into my car and thought about where to eat, I needed to go to ch afterwards to meet my cousin so it had to be somewhere close. (Ch is the name of this club that most of my friends and family go to, sorta teen friendly and a minimum on the booze if your of age etc.) I wanted something to eat that was kinda healthy but still fast food, so I went to Wendy’s. I got a number 5 and actually sat in the restaurant as opposed to eating in the car. After a few bites, I started to look around while munchen on some fries. And behold sitting 4 tables away from me there he was (no not Lou), we locked eyes and we started to realize whom each other was ( or Jeremy). I started to laugh with a french fry in my mouth and he did the same with his straw.

“Zachary?” I asked half laughing. He frowned a little. “Err I mean, Zak?”

“Ares?” He asked.

“Dude, what’s up?” I said gesturing for him to come to my table.
“Nothen much man.” He said getting his food then walking over to me. “Grabbing a bite before I head to ch.”

“Oh your going there to?” I asked restating his statement.

“Yeah, I gotta get some action” He joked. Zak was 5’11 with a gorgeous crop of long light brown hair, and the deepest light blue eyes you will ever see in your life. He had a swimmers build, and as far as I knew was into asian girls, like Jeremy. Of course I crushed on him for a long time, but made up my mind he was out of my league, even if there was a chance he was gay.

“Dude, I guess we can go up there together no?” I asked

“Yea man that will be great, wont feel like a weirdo perv looking for ass if I don’t roll up alone.” He joked again and I laughed. “Alright, we ride in your car or mine?” He asked.

“Yours, I don’t feel like driving” I said.

“Alright, hurry up then I’m kinda excited now.” He said with a big smile.

“Okay?” I questioned kinda puzzled but started eating faster when he just kept smiling, instead of explaining. After we finished,. I drove my car to Billy’s and got in Zak’s car. We headed straight to Ch after he stopped to get some gas. All the while we were riding to the club I saw Zak steal glances at me with a big smile over his face. I looked through his Cd’s and told him how much I liked the bands and artists he listened to. Once we got there it was around 6 pm, usually this time is when my cousin gets off so I didn’t even bother looking for her car I knew she wasn’t here yet. We got inside went straight to the bar and got some drinks. There was a group of mutual friends sitting in the lounge area, so we headed over, gave some greetings, handshakes and hugs, then I heard this laugh. I turned and saw my cousin talking to one of her friends, of course my reaction was “wtf”, I went over and stared at her until she noticed me.

“Oh, hey how long you been here?” She asked.

“Umm about 2 minutes.” I said.

“Oh, well I got off of work early so I’ve been here for about 2 hours.” She said. “Hey, buy me a drink.” She said as she got up and we headed over to the bar. “ So, what happen last night?” she asked

“What do you mean?” I asked puzzled.

“Umm, the guy on the couch at 2 in the morning?” she stated as she grabbed the straw in her drink with her tongue.

“Oh, nothing really that was just some guy that…” I said.

“Just some guy? You brought home just some guy?” She interrupted.

“Well, he’s a friend of a friend, he wont be just some guy for long.” I said with a grin on my face.

“Oh, well you be careful.” She said looking at her phone. “There’s a lot of whackos out there, oh snap I got to go,” She said then she gave me a kiss on the cheek and left. I headed back over to the group and that’s when I noticed Daniel. Daniel was a former friend of mine that I new way back when. He was about 5’10, black hair, black eyes, average body with thick calves that I adored. After a few jokes here and there, Daniel came out of the blue with…

“Yeah, Ares hates me too.” He stated. I of course was shocked, for some reason all these guys believed I disliked them. I guess handling my depression the way I did and keeping to myself lead them to believe I distained them.

“Uhh were did you get that idea?” I asked while some of them started to chuckle. I pulled Daniel aside and explained to him that I in no way disliked him. He said things like yeah okay, that in body language seemed to mean “yeah, what ever” but I later found out that he believed my words. So after everyone got loosened up we started dancing and talking more. Random jokes were passed throughout the night.

“Man I haven’t gotta laid in over a day” Daniel said.

“Oh wow a whole day, that some kind of record?” This guy named Cody said. I stood there with my mouth dropped given my personal record.


“Yeah I need to find someone tonight, or ima turn blue.” Daniel said.

“I think I can help you out with that?” I vaguely smirked.

“Oh really? Like what?” Daniel asked?

“Everything.” I said again vaguely. Zak’s eyebrows arched up then he asked.

“Are they flirting?”

“I think so.” Cody said. But me and Daniel just kept talking ignoring everyone else.

“What do you mean by everything?” Daniel asked.

“Find out.” I said.

“Tell me.” He demanded.

“Lets go somewhere quieter then.” I said. He nodded and we headed out, I waved to Zak as to say ill see you later. He nodded a little puzzled and kept on dancing. Once we got outside he asked,

“Where’s your car at?”

“At a friends house, I came here with Zak.” I said.

“Oh okay, then I guess we can take my car.” He said. We got into his car and drove off.

“Where are we going?” I asked.

“Somewhere quite.” He said. After a while the city lights started to fade away and I realized we were heading out to the country part of town.

“Where are we going again?” I asked jumping to an assumption that this guy might kill me.

“You’ll see.” He confirmed vaguely. So after a few more minutes he drove up to this dirt road of this farm (crop farm, no livestock). We got out and I nervously followed him, we went passed some hedges, over a fence, till we got to this very very soft grass near an old abandoned house. I knew this could be dangerous, if he decided to kill me there was really no where to go and a nice house to hide the body in. I looked around for a while when I almost jumped when I felt something on my neck.

“Easy, is this what you meant by quieter?” He said. As I felt his lips on the back of my neck and his soft breath blew through me as he spoke so softly.

“Yeah.” I said closing my eyes and let my body go to lean back on him. “So, how many boys or girls do you take out here?” I asked

“one, I only take special people out here to fuck.” He said. I was amazed how honest he was with me, I could never find myself to be as honest as him, I only tell people what they want to hear.

“Oh really?” I asked. I turned around to face him. “How do you know your going to fuck me?” I asked with a grin.

“Because you told me.” He said. I arched my eyebrows.

“When?” I asked.

“When you said, “everything” I figured out on the way here you meant love.” He stated.

“mhmm.” I said, I liked and will continue to like how he figured me out when I’m vague unlike everyone else. I brought my lips to his and we kissed. I held his face and he held my body. I couldn’t believe this was actually happening, I’ve never done anything so bold like this before. I took off his shirt and broke the kiss, I kissed his chin while he rubbed my back. This was my favorite line of kisses, I kissed his neck, then his chest, then I licked his nipples. I looked up at him and he looked down at me with a smile. I planted kisses on his stomach, and then his navel. He took off my shirt then we both fell onto the floor. I grabbed his belt buckle and started to undo it. He closed his eyes and laid back. I reached inside his pants and rubbed his dick through his underwear. He started to breathe heavier and I pressed my lips against his underwear and blew onto him. I stuck my tongue out and licked his crotch. I licked his underwear slow, then faster and faster. Pretty soon I felt his hand on the back of my head urging me to please him. I pulled down his pants and boxers then took his growing dick in my hand. I licked it up and down until it got to full mass at 7 inches, then I placed it in my mouth and hummed. To his satisfaction he moaned out loudly. I took his fat cock to the back of my throat, and rubbed his body as I did so. He started to force my head down so I could deep throat him. I took his dick back into my hand and licked the underside of his head. I licked down his shaft to the base and continued till I reached his sac. I gulped in one the two and kept them in my mouth while I jacked his dick. He moaned and huffed vigorously. He grabbed my head and brought me back to his dick. I sucked in his cock and played with his balls. He moaned harder and then pressed down my head on his dick. After a few seconds I heard him scream out so sexily, followed by this hot creamy liquid shooting from the tip of his head down my throat. I was happy that he gave me his reward and treasured it down my throat. He sighed heavily and slowly leaned up and rested on his elbows as I to raised up licking my lips.

“That was so good, so how bout you?” He asked.

“Nah I’m good, I’m just glad I made you happy.” I said.

“So you must be a pure uke.” He said. I looked confused then asked,

“What does that mean?” He started to pull up his pants and explained.

“With guys there’s the seme and uke.” He said. “A uke is like a bottom or slave and the seme is the top or master.”

“Oh, so I’m a pure uke?” I asked.

“Yeah, that means you only like to please and don’t care for the return.” He said.

“So, how many pure ukes have you had?” I asked

“None, you’re the first.” He said.
“Oh, well that’s interesting.” I said. “So what now?” I asked.

“I dunno, I guess we should go, or…” He said.

“Or what? We could stay here and…” I asked.

“Yeah,” He said, as he buckled up his pants. I laid on his chest and we started talking. He asked me about my previous relationships and if I was with anyone at that moment, which I wasn’t. Then we addressed his ‘sexcapades’, his current girlfriend and lack of a boyfriend. As he brushed my hair he asked me if we should date, and for some reason I accepted even though he had a girlfriend. She knew about him and later found out me as I did her. Sooner or later my eyes forced their way closed.

*His hands are all over me, flowers are following from the sky. Daniel is breaking up with some girl in the back round, but his hands are all over me. I can hardly see Zak, but I can feel his hands all over me. Someone comes close to me and grabs me then shakes me to get a sudden shock~ then I wake up.

***I’ve decided to go further then just Lou and I and explain everything that has happen in the past year, which makes the stories much much longer. As you will soon be able to tell, the sex scenes will get better throughout each entry.**

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