Louser IV

(Part 1 from 1. Fiction.)

~To those whove been following this story, sorry i haven't posted in awhile, I moved and left my computer, this section is was actually written after Louser 3 and has been sitting in a folder. So I hope you enjoy and I promise I will get better and finish the rest. Thank you so much~


So after being lost for a few times, I find myself at Daniel’s house. I rest my head on Zak’s steering wheel for a few seconds and raise my head and sigh. Wait, what the fuck am I doing, I ask myself, I’m getting ready to break up with someone I haven’t even been with for that long, pull it together Ares. So I get out, and walk up to his house. Out comes Heidi, which just fuels the fire of my original purpose. I say hello to her, but she returns the greeting uneasy as if she’s trying to play along. I don’t know what game both of them are playing with me, but I’m going to end it now (is what I think to myself).

When I walk in, no ones there, which makes me confused, since Heidi just walked out of here. I look around for a while until my phone rings again. It’ Daniel, he tells me to come to the beach, still confused cause there’s not any ordinary beaches where we live. But then I see out of his patio window, sand. I walk out, and there he is sitting next to a candle, in nothing other then a t-shirt and thin white shorts, all romantic like. I’m not in the mood for Heidi’s sloppy seconds, so I try to go over there and set him straight. He gets up immediately before I have a chance to utter one word, and kisses me. Directly on the lips, I can feel his hands on the back of my head and on my face. My eyes slowly close, but my mouth stays open. I try to push him off but he’s so determined. He grabs me with his entire body, and shoves his crotch into mine. He picks me up, not breaking the kiss, and gently lays me down into the sand. He rubs his groin on me, I can feel his hard-on through his shorts. He breathes heavily as we continue to kiss, I’m so confused at this point I could hardly tell which way is up. He licks my face, and then moves down to my neck.

My eyes open, I’m out of his trance… then his mouth under my chin makes the sky swirl and my eyes close again. He breathes deeply into my neck and picks me back up, so that we are both sitting up. He falls backwards nibbling on my neck and I follow him, he rolls over me so that he’s back on top. I can feel his dick, hard as a rock, on my left leg and I can also feel my pants unbuckling. I try to come to my senses, “Why is he doing this, we both know he’s more interested in Heidi, I mean she just left here. Why is he doing this?” I ask myself again. Then I no longer feel my jeans on my body, my boxers are lost as well. Looking up at the sky Daniel’s head slowly starts to appear in view. Then I can feel that his dick is free from its confines. I can feel hands under my legs raise up, I can feel Daniels breathe on my neck, and not long afterwards I can feel his dick inside me. No lube or preparation, he just straight fucked me. He grunted hard with the first slow thrust. My eyes rolled back as I felt him enter me. The second thrust was harder, so much so that the sand shifted below me and I slided further back away from him, away from Daniel.

But he quickly found his way back to me, and he quickly filled me back up. I moaned softly as he re-entered me, he held on to me and thrusted back into me. He fucked me like this for a while. Slowly his lips found their way to mine, and his hands found their way into my hair. We started to slide again because he let go of his stance, less fucking more grinding. As we kissed my hands fell towards his, smooth, perfectly shaped ass. When he thrusted I grabbed, when he grinded I squeezed, we were in sync. The sun was no longer in view as our sweat started to mix with the sand. Without a suggestion from me, he pulled us up still kissing. He guided me backwards into his house, we didn’t make it up stairs or even to the couch. The sandy trail ended on the living room carpet. After a while Daniel’s fucking started to get intense, his throbbing dick started to build pressure inside of me. He grunted louder, his grasp on my body tightened. I felt his rod swell to max, then it exploded. We both yelled in pleasure with the vibrations from both of out bodies. Our chests heaved as we tried to catch our breaths when Daniel collapsed on top of me.

“Fuck” I said, letting my head fall wherever, realizing what just happen. Then I thought to myself maybe this is just a break up fuck and now its over. I looked over to Daniel’s face to try to talk to him about what just happen, but his eyes were already shut and his mouth started to blow that sweet intoxicating smell that you could only get while sleeping. I wanted to leave, I wanted to get up and go and reclaim my senses, but his arms wrapped tightly around me… felt so good. I laid there, studying his face, feeling his body, until I to drifted off…

~ So many people here, its so crowded, its like a war zone. But everything is still, all I can see is Daniel.~

“Mmmmm.” I yawn and stretch my arms. My arms feel my surroundings, and cool blue sheets is what they find. I open my eyes to find myself in this room I have yet seen, until now. Light blue walls, cluttered so I can only see one square window, a big screen television, two computer monitors with matching pc’s, a wooden dresser, and this big comfortable bed (and I stress the word comfortable because I never find comfort in my own furniture). Before I realize I’m in Daniel’s room, I ask myself “Who has a big screen TV in their bedroom.” and then in walks Daniel. It’s 1:30 in the afternoon so he’s just getting back from morning classes. I sit up and blink my eyes twice trying to focus on him, “Hey baby, what’s up?” I ask.

“Hi love, we need to talk.” He says right before kissing me. Then the emotions come flooding back on how bad and good I felt last night.
“He’s going to break up with me, that was my first break up sex.” I tell myself. I look away from him and ask him, “about what?”.

“About our relationship, and where its headed.” He says, of course

“Oh, okay…” I say.

“Well I’m breaking up….” here it comes “with…” he says “Heidi, cause I sense that its making you uncomfortable” I freeze, I look calmly at Daniel, even though in side my mind my eyes are wide open with “oh my god oh my god oh my god”. I say.


“Okay” and kiss him and hug him then go back to sleep. Now that I look back on it, I should have been more appreciative that he had my feelings in consideration, instead of just “okay” like some emotionless, thankless loser. I don’t really know how to show my emotions anymore, and I’m guessing I need to fix that. When I re-awake I remember I have Zak’s car and he has mine, so I call him up and ask him for an exchange. He tells me he’s heading to ch (of course) so I get ready and go there to meet him. I dunno how, but I managed to get there 3 minutes before he did, unusual considering Daniel’s house was 12 minutes farther then Zak’s. Waiting for him to pull up with keys in hand, I talk to the regulars that are also expecting him. Finally he pulls up, after he parks I walk up to my car to speed this up because I’m already tired of ch. When he gets out of the car the first thing I see are his blue eyes, they stop me dead in my tracks. I’m stuck for the time and duration in between his blinking.

When he walks to wherever I ended up, he gives me a greeting, switches the keys and walks into ch. You know how when you reveal your feelings to your crush, and then you no longer feel that way? Yeah, he got that, its like I didn’t even know him anymore and on top of that I still felt the same way about him. A little emo I get in my car and drive home. When I get there I realize that I need to put in some hours at work, (I love how flexible my job is) so I take a shower and head into one of the offices of Vector Marketing. After about 2 or 2 and a half hours I end up calling Daniel and telling him how much I love him and miss him (all the usual “I’m in love” crap). He gets out of his noon classes at five so I decided to leave at 4 to meet up with him. When I go to the closest restaurants near his school, I find him sitting outside the usual sub shop he eats at with a sandwich in his hand in his car getting ready to leave. I hurry out of my car and jump in his, he’s startled until he recognizes me.

“What are you doing?” Daniel asks puzzled. I don’t say anything and let my hands do the talking. I scoot closer to him from the passenger side and start to rub his inner thighs. I kiss his neck and move my hands to his belt buckle. He realizes what I’m doing, chokes down the rest of his sandwich and starts his car. I dunno where he took me it looked like the back of some neighborhood near the old park, whatever it was I wasn’t paying attention to that. I finally got his belt loose and started to unzip his pants. He laid back into the seat and rested his head in his hands, like he already knew what he was getting. I pulled apart his pants and searched through his boxers for his dick. When I found it I pulled it out and started jerking it. He moaned app/rovingly, so I opened my mouth, bent down and sucked in his dick.

His cock started to swell to full followed by his hand on the back of my head pressing down. His throbbing rod soon found its way to the back of my throat as I engulfed it. I loved the taste of it, accompanied by the sweet precum (yes, he eats a lot of fruit for me). I slurped and moaned and he moaned and thrusted. Soon I could feel his other hand on my head holding it steady as he fucked his dick into my mouth. With each thrust I swirled my tongue around his passing dick. After a while of his cock in my mouth he started to buck, I wrapped my lips around it so I wouldn’t miss a thing. He forced my head all the way down, and then started to pump my throat full of cum. He grunted so loudly as he kept my head on his dick. I closed my eyes and slowly swallowed his cum. I kept sucking until his dick went soft, then licked it. He got up and checked the time, he had about 15 minutes to make a 10 minute (With traffic) drive, so to save time I just got out right there like some hustler and said I’d walk. After he drove off I started to walk back, then I remember I don’t know where he took me and Oh I have a freaking boner with cum on my breath. But that’s okay cause out of nowhere Billy shows up to keep me company (wtf?).
“Ares?” He said.

“Yeah?” I answered.

“The fuck are you doing here? And who was that that just pulled off.” He questioned.

“Dude, I have no fucking idea, and that was Daniel.” I replied.

“Haha, alright and what’s that in your pants, you stealing shit again?” He continued to bombard me with questions.

“Wait wait wait, what the fuck are you doing here?” I countered with a question of my own.

“Uhh, Jeal wanted me to drop something off at her cousins house, but seriously dude you can poke an eye out with that thing put, it away.” He joked

“I can’t, it comes out every time I see you.” I joked.

“Haha, do you need a ride my car’s right, over there.” He gestured.

“Yeah I guess, I was gonna hitch-hike and what not…” I joked as we walked to his car. We kept cracking jokes till he dropped me off at the Sub shop. When I got into my car it was only around 6:30, so I decided to go to work until Daniel got home. So I follow my plan until about two hours later, and my phone rings…

“It’s Lou”…

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