Posted by kacy keep writing i am so n2 this story its wicked sick i love every second of it great job!!!
Posted by David YES!!!
ive been waiting so long for you to make another part to this story. i thought u quite writting them or went to a new site or something. well this story is probly the only one on this site that has really cought my intrest to follow. so i really hope u make more. :)
-David
Posted by Ivan Getn gud keep it up like where dis is going make damian love jack more n more sex hehe
Posted by J yeah this is really good i cant wait till the next chapter im really getting into it!!!!!!!!!11
Posted by C Whoa..awesome story. I need more
Posted by peter i really loved all of the chapters and cant wait for more. the is the story i keep reading over & over.
Posted by jerry i love it!!!! this story is hot!! cant wait for the next chapter =)
Posted by Braedon Dear Viktor Grant, Oh my god! I LOVE ur storie series (love bite). I don't really know but chapter 5 didn't seem finished so I was wondering if your making a 6,7,8.... And really I hope you are because, again, I LOVE the story and can't wait to see, or well read, how it turns out and finishes! I think it is such a beautiful story of love and I can't wait!!!!! P.S: please reply to my message! Thanks much!
Posted by Angel of death First,i love it very very much,second,why always the good stories are unfinished?,plz i wanna know what will happen next ,plz again continue ,u have amazing talent keep writing,