Michael and Ian (part One) reviews

This was based on a fantasy that I asked David to write and he did it very well, I loved the story and very much looking forward to part 2. Keep up the good work. M.

WOW, superb storytelling. I can't wait for the nexr episode. Heep up the good work.

AMAZING!!! You trully are the best writer on this site so far. You're story isn't a bunch of shit thrown together. Man I felt like I knew the characters. You really should write a book or something major. Excellent. Keep writing. Looking forward to a sequal love.