Posted by Michael B. Nice concept with the changing point of views. Perhaps it would be a little more effective if the POV didn't shift so quickly from person to person. Good story though.
Posted by Starfreak good plot line... interesting without the whole lot of hot steamy sex ... A+
Posted by David this is the best story on this site!! i wish to god that there will be a part 2..i will be waiting to find out what jason decides..i feel like i really know them..it reminds me of my life and how i feel..it was awesome!!!!
Posted by David Green I really enjoyed both parts of this story. I especially like the way you brought everything and everyone together in part II. When can we expect part three?
David G.
Posted by me hey david this is a cool story but Detention is still the best one =P
Posted by jam2697 This story is very hot so far - there are resemblances to my life and the guy i fancy. I can't wait to read more :)
As I love waterskiing, I had decided to spend the day at Club Med "Les Boucanniers" located not too far from our house on the island of Martinique. I had no idea I was about to meet my destiny there...