Posted by Hiram Really BELIEVEABLE! More!
Posted by Jason Leidman a few typos, but amazing nevertheless. I loved it alot.
Posted by seymour cox great plot, still some typos for which I am the king of. What I missed was.........well a lot. Who is he, and who are you. What was your freindship like before it became sexual. Ya know! things that can give me a mental picture of what you guys look like and what happened that lead to the first time, what it was like, who started it? - where you scared?, nerveous?
Posted by Kenneth Micek Yea I agree with Seymour. It is a good story but would like to know more about the first time.
Posted by You'll never really know this sint really areview cuz this is me, the author talking, if u want to know a little bit more, check out the other story, the part 1, but sorry, u'll never know mine or his name.
Posted by Pat Great story. Pat:)
Posted by Pat To the author, How do I get to part one? I would love to read the story. It is unfortunate that I can't get to know you. Is this story true? If so I hope that you are both very happy together. Take care, Pat:)