Posted by Esquire Great story! Although it's more bisexual than first-time. However, it's VERY unrealistic. I live in Bloomfield Hills, and spend a LOT of time in West Bloomfield. Nothing like this ever happens. Ever. Unfortunatly. Either way, nice writing.
Posted by Matt I was a very good story, if you are a straight man. I was very bored until the ending of the story. If you want to call it a gay story, you should have had more GAY action in it, instead of the wife having sex the whole time. But, it did have very good writing techniques and style. It was just on the wrong website.
Posted by Pravin Hai Can Be Side Mamber
Posted by JP Didn't really care for the story untill the end. I think you should stick to the more entertaining stories of gay sex and lifes. With all the female sex it kinda made the story boring. Sorry but the ending wasnt to bad.
