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Moon Story: Part 1 reviews

Posted by Nathaniel Ender
Okay i love the whole werewolves thing i must admit, but nevertheless you still have another story to finish, if you were to do this and undead love at the same time it would be great because, i mean you cant just leave that story like you did i was on the edge of my seat and the whole vamp thing is so hot and-just finish that one first, or do it at the same time
Posted by Koua
This is an amazing story!
Posted by Chris
awww Noo! Why end it there??? I hate it when it gets to the good parts and people end it... Anyways Very good story!
Posted by Ethan
OMG I LOVE IT!!! SO UNIQUE!!
Posted by Eric
This is like a bajilion times better then the vampire crap, an yay he isnt a twink and has a regular body. Umm Team Daniel!!!
Posted by Kris
I love this story but this story is all too familiar. Damsel in distress gets saved by heroic knight in shiny armor. Please, make the protagonist strong enough to at least fight his small battles without always calling for help or being a cry baby. This would make his relationship with Sean a perfect, evenly matched fit instead of a Walt Disney fairy tale.
Posted by Ivan
Please continue this! I usually dont enjoy Sci-fi stories but this one is actually really good. So please continue!
Posted by Garth
Awesome story cant wait till part 2
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