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My 18th Birthday reviews

Posted by Max
hi dear that a great story i wanna gear more. plz el what happen plz........i can't wait............
Posted by larry
i would love to see want happens next
Posted by Ken
Interesting story but it could use more detail and yes I want to find out what happened.
Posted by jesse
ohhh i definately want to read another story!!!!!!
Posted by ben
yeah i want to see what happens
Posted by shawn
come on do the sequel i must no what they say
Posted by bs
write the sequal that was good but I would like to know what happened with your parents and if things continued or was it a one time thing
Posted by Jake
Dude you can't just leave it like that.... you have to let me and everyone know what happened next. DId your folks just die?? did you proclaim your love for one another and live happily ever after with collin... suckin and fuckin for the rest of your youthful years.. Do tell.. love, come on share with us all... Thanx baby , so far it was a very hot story. I can't wait to hear the rest..
Posted by dave
hi ur too sweet
Posted by MIke
hot! let me hear more!
Posted by Rob
ok what happened that was hot as hell I was totaly boned.
Posted by Jeb
I thought this story was extremely racist and homophobic. It was clearly making fun of retarted people
Posted by refitchef
ahh excellent would luv to read more
Posted by Jim
Sweet story, I spewed alot. I would love to read more from you!
Posted by glenn
i want to hear what happened after ur parents caught ya
Posted by terry murphy
it is a great story and i do hopethat you did write a sequel as i would be interested in finding out how your parents reacted when they found you in bed with you friend collin. hope they weren't too hard on you as it was your first time.
Posted by Eric
so that was a great story send me the sequel
Posted by eric
that was amazing
Posted by jonathan
i would like to know more what happed after your mom and dad were there
Posted by Sime
I love this story complete it please
Posted by Inggit
so what ur parents did to u ? reply my email please
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