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Posted by baygon
omg thats great can't wait to find the next installment
Posted by Anthony
good story
Posted by Jake
Thanks guys, I wrote a story like it before, posted it but.. Lets just say it was amateur, so this is actually a Revision. Ill work on the next part tomorrow. Probably will be 3-4 days before I post it. Thanks though!
Posted by Ken
Can't wait for the next part. This is really good so far.
Posted by Jordan
keep going, the story is great, don't change our mode of the story i like it alot
Posted by Seymour Cox
It is a great storyline. But [and this is just Seymour Cox saying this] build the intimacy a little slower. Decide if this is two horny guys messing around or if love and commitment will come into play.
But all and all, I be the first to say - I came!
Posted by Eddie
This story waz great! It waz so intresting and it got me hard untill tha part abotu the accident. Pleaz write more
Posted by Jake Rivers
This story was great and filled with drama
which i like and wish i could write as good
Posted by Jake
Thanks again for your posts. The Next story will be up soon guys, I promise. :)
Posted by Jake
Sorry it's taking so long guys. I've been quite busy these past few days but I have the part 2 half-way done. I'm not going to rush it though, I want it to be interesting. So, you may have to wait another day or two, but I promise it will be up no later than three days!
Posted by Jake
Sorry it's taking so long guys. I've been quite busy these past few days but I have the part 2 half-way done. I'm not going to rush it though, I want it to be interesting. So, you may have to wait another day or two, but I promise it will be up no later than three days!
Posted by Scott
Jake! Good job, and don't listen to Seymore. All he can do is write stories about coming out...NOTHING ELSE...a little diversity for him would be good though!!! Anywayz, good job and I look forward to the next part!
Posted by Jack Porter
This is great. i love these kinds of stories. write alot more PLEASE.
Posted by smagsi
hey i think this is one of the most amazing stories! its been amazing n i wud want you to write more its really eye catching!there wasnt even a time wen i took my eyes off the story! so please write more! i luved ur story! thnx, just dont let him die :'( this tory is making me cry already! its just awsome
Posted by smagsi
hey i think this is one of the most amazing stories! its been amazing n i wud want you to write more its really eye catching!there wasnt even a time wen i took my eyes off the story! so please write more! i luved ur story! thnx, just dont let him die :'( this tory is making me cry already! its just awsome
Posted by smagsi
hey i think this is one of the most amazing stories! its been amazing n i wud want you to write more its really eye catching!there wasnt even a time wen i took my eyes off the story! so please write more! i luved ur story! thnx, just dont let him die :'( this tory is making me cry already! its just awsome
Posted by Jake Meredin
Ok guys, chapter 2 is sent in. Should be up soon!
Posted by Hiram
Why do you guys think it is cool to write a half story with a clif-hanger ending. The story is good so far, but if you can only write a half story at a time, wait till you're finished before publishing.
Posted by Jake Meredin
Hiram : Because cliff-hanger endings keep you wanting more.. Why publish a whole story (unless its a movie) which is basic. It keeps the reader guessing, which is what you want. Ever seen Lord of The Rings? Granted, the reason it couldn't publish all in one was because it was so long, but first off the director wanted to see how it would do. As did I in my story. So, unless you have useful information/criticism on my story, Please don't post. I apologize if I sound rude, but you came off saying my story was half-ass. It takes a great imagination to create a great story, THAT is what im trying to do.
Posted by will
i find this close to being a movie . i think that this is a good story . i will waite to read the rest . i hope that you write more on this . i will hold my breath , so dont let me die .
Posted by Jake Meredin
Just waiting on them to post next one guys, But its up. Lemme know what u think of it..
Posted by Lenny
Hi, I just read - Blue eyes passion #1 and #2 wow were they ever hot and sexy, you had me wanting to join the both of you, I hope your Mother is ok with you and Aeron and will under stand or did under stand, you two guys are hot, yum yum
Thanks Lenny
Posted by chris
i can't wait for the next one please write another please
Posted by rayne
i realy enjoyed it and hope you do continuye it it could make a great novel someday if you wish it to be
Posted by willy
omg PLEASE write more please i need to know what happens its killing me
Posted by David Rogers
good story sorry to hear about his wreck hope he is ok and still alive hope you two get together forever.
Posted by zabb
one of best story ever read ..... You are one of a touchy author and literally you made me cry.... I respect your writing... Hats off
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