Posted by Jake These stories are wonderful!!! I can't keep myself from reading them over and over, and applying it to my life. My relationship is kinda like this one. Anyways, Keep writing man. I love the sotries. I will read anything you write. Make it like 10 or MORE parts. PLEASE.
Jake
Posted by Bob don't feel bad for "thinking" that you took a long time!!! Better than the first!!! Please write more!!! Love every second of it!!
Posted by Ken This is a real touching story. I like it very much.
please keep on going. Take your time I know how work can be. Thanks
Posted by Jake Meredin Thanks guys, I appreciate it. Working on Part 3 tomorrow! Should be up by the end of the weekend, if not Monday. Thanks for your posts!
Posted by dwc I love it. Great story!!! and take your time. dont rush it.
Posted by D-Man Dude This is A Great Story You Really Should Write another Part to this story I Think its awesome and i also think its perfect
Posted by Mark R Lyon Again way to FABULOUS!!!!
Posted by Madeline Your writing is amazing. The build up and cliff hangers. You are gifted and dont ever think otherwise. Keep writing and remember good stories take time.
Posted by sdvss why is everyone so hooked on this story. It is SHIT. The grammar, punctuation is out of key. Not to mention the fact that you can't tell who says what because converstaions are running into each other on the same lines. I had to stop after the first paragraph
Posted by andrew this great this exactly wat im goin thru too!! right more plz!
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