Posted by Mike Had the potential to be a good story but quickly lost the potential and became just another story along familiar lines. When will the authors of these stories realise that we, the readers, enjoy something a bit different. Give us a story and intertwine sexual activity with it but give the characters some depth as well. Two dimensionalism isn't horny. Read the work of the good authors on this site such as Michael Booker or Sebastian Wallace to see how to really get the reader going. Their stories are everything we, horny guys, want and more besides.Unfortunately this shit wasn't.....
Posted by Jesse yea... this story sucked. Sorry.
