It isn't contrived or implausible. It is written pretty well. Seems realistic enough, perhaps what a first time is like. Negatives:
No plot. Quite routiness in sex description.
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Posted by btm.m2m Not bad, I remember the first time I got fucked and the pain and disappointment of not getting the guy off in my ass...makes me want to get fucked again.
Posted by Tyler Dude let me get this guys number please. I haven't had anything more than the head of a cock in my ass and i want his all the way in and screaming. I also would like to swallow my first huge load of cum.
“Just set here at the bus stop and a fag would come by and ask if you wanted to take a ride. Then you will hop in the car. The fag will want to ‘feel you up’, and you will say, ‘If you want my cock, you will have to pay for it.’ He will drive you to a quiet spot and blow you. The usual price was about $20.00. He will drop you off here again and then you can go have a good time.” Jack told me.