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Posted by the guy that shall remain nameless BARTON PEVERIL in Eastleigh????. Thats where im going next year. Uve freaked me out now mate LOL
Posted by ken danny i think your story is hot please write some more
Posted by Eve Gotta agree with Ken. It's always refreshing to read a story in which the writer makes some attempt at building the characters and setting the scene, it makes the sex even hotter. You could really develop this one. Don't wait for loads of replys, just keep posting. I love it.
Posted by tezza that is so hot i wish that sum thing like thayt happens to me
Posted by kaney wow! please continue
Posted by chris i love it want to read more
Posted by wow500 L.O.V.E. it. seriously dude,give me more that was fucking amazing (literally)
Not much to really critque on, just write to enjoy.
Posted by james m AWSOME story man! loved it! i love how the main character is so shy. dont change him
Posted by Gary I liked the way the story flowed. I got a ragin hard on while reading the story. I hope that Daniel returns the favor in your next story. Be sure an give a good discription of Jason's body as Daniel explores the studly counseler. Then some hot flip-flop fuck action.