Posted by Alex Harrison please !!!!!!continue
Posted by Alex Harrison please !!!!!!continue
Posted by Glen OMG!!!!! This is such a hot story! You HAVE to continue!!!!
Posted by justin You ruined this bOok for me...you should of made it with dameian and erick
Posted by Zack Great story u have to continue it! I have To know what happens next! This is hot ;)
Posted by josh please write more ok this mite be weird but im 12 and i no a lot. i get hard ons reading ur stories. r u gay?
Posted by Jay Benson I would like your story more - If I could understand it! The English is very bad at best and the spelling is horrid!
Posted by Gayturnons Really? House of night? Might be better if you correctly spelled things and added info in a way that flows... And get the info right! The vampires don't just say "oh let's change someone today" there are trackers and Nyx tells them who to mark... could be so much better with little effort
Posted by sammy i say, More please. send some to my address, same1434@hotmail.com
Posted by Ben Dover ....get orginal and don't turned "marked" into a porn story
Posted by lover Omf I LOVED it pitty no fangs but brillant!!!!
Posted by caleb This story was based on zoey and starks relationship in the house of night series just switched into a gay role with different characters.