Posted by ian brilliant as always. looking forward to the next part. hope that nathan can join in with them as well maybe. just something that i would like to read
Posted by Mike Jeff, excellent follow up chapter there. Chapter 4 there soon?? LOL Keep it up man!
Posted by David Green Jeff this story just keeps getting hotter by the chapter and I'm loving every bit of it.
David G.
Posted by Jeff MacDonald Thanks guys for your comments. Let me think about writing a Chapter IV. One of the problems is the innocence of the teen is now gone which of course makes the story less thrilling. I can write more , but now it becomes more of a love story rather than just a first time sexual encounter. Let me ask you this-- would you all like to see the teen fuck Nathan’s dad? Would you like see Nathan’s dad engage the teen in some light male bondage . Please give me your thoughts on what you would like to see and maybe I will write a few more parts to the story.
Ian,--It would be interesting to see teen engage in sex with Nathan, but I can’t see Nathan sucking or fucking his dad. But maybe Nathan and his dad can
gang bang the teen . Anyway please give me your thoughts.
Posted by sal i think incest is kinda hot, i think you should maybe get nathan's dad to bondage nathan, and get nathan to like it eventually as the other guy pleasures his dad? i don't know just a thought
Posted by Mike Jeff...The light bondage would be on the hot side for sure. I am thinking keep Nathan out of this story. Remember though, we are only on DAY ONE. You could maybe end this experience with the teen going home and thinking about this for a week or so. The next time they got together would be animal lust for sure. Maybe even have the teen seduce Dad the way HE was seduced in the pool. I don't think you should have the teen fuck Dad though. It will take away from the older guy being the "dominant" one. Maybe have one of Dad's buds join in? Tag team the teen so to speak. But, DEFINITELY keep Nathan out of the story. No place for him in it really. Anyway, your other story was hot too so no matter what you do, I am sure it will be good. I cannot believe I keep responding to your stories. You are seriously the only one I do LOL.
Posted by Jeff MacDonald Thanks everyone for your input. I tend to think more along the lines with Mike, and where the story should go, with all due respect to everyone else’s opinion. But again, many thanks for your thoughts. The way I see it, the Teen isn’t into guys like him. If he were, he would have had the hots for Nathan a long time ago. In fact the Teen can’t quiet admit to being gay yet. He just knows at this point he is extremely turned on to Nathan’s naked dad much more than he his to females or anyone else for that fact. Thus I am going to keep Nathan out of the story(at least the sexual part of it anyway). Without a doubt the Teen likes masculinity, maturity and domination. On the other hand Nathan’s dad likes innocence, smoothness, submissiveness and youthfulness. Thus it makes Nathan’s dad and the Teen a perfect match in heaven. The Teen is also enjoying playing a duel role. Sometimes he want’s to be the Nathan’s dad boyfriend and at other times he likes pretending to be his little boy. Remember the Teen was never close to his father and therefore likes to flashback and live his yesteryear only this time with Nathan’s dad in both a bizarre sexual and non-sexual way.
Posted by Jeff MacDonald Oh, I forgot to add, PartIV coming soon.
Posted by Mike YOU ROCK JEFF! haha
Posted by Jeff MacDonald Ian, Thanks for all your kind replies. Let's see where the story goes from here--I know you want to see Nathan join in the fun--but I don't want to add him to the story--at least not for now--but maybe will put him later. How's that? Part IV is done and has been sent in for posting--please let me know what you think. Thanks so much. Jeff
Posted by Jeff Hey Guys, I don't think this website is going to post Part IV even though i think it is one of the best chapters to the story. If you want part IV, just e-mail me and I will send it to you.
Posted by Ruud van Tintelen it still is a very caryfully hot continuan story!