Posted by Hawk Lyra It was a good story that was poorly written. The fact that it was actually your first time makes it ten times hotter. :) If you were to write more stories I suggest you slow the story down and add more details. Also spell check, Its dissapointing all the crappy grammar that stories have these days.
Posted by JHON I LOVE IT BECAUSE SOUNDS REAL NOT A HOLYWOOD PORN MOVIES,,,GOOD FOR YOU,,
Posted by neil dalrymple Great story. I'd like to meet either of you !
More please.....
Posted by Aaron That Was Preety Cool :)