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Posted by Rob K
You must remember when writing not just stories but everything is that if you say I as in yourself I, it needs to be a capital letter always.
WRONG:
i like chips.
CORRECT:
I like chips.
Posted by JT
Good story! Need to work on your grammar and spelling, though. It takes away from the story a lot when stuff is misspelled or things like that.
-JT
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