Posted by Brad Smith This may be the worst story I have ever read. I'm assuming the author is between the ages of 10 and 16. Please stop writing immediately.
Posted by alex-sp It's so stupid...
Posted by Mike What a total load of shit. This pathetic attemp at a story reads as though it was written by a seven year old.
Give up mate - don't bother again ... you can't write ... there is nothing horny about this story at all.