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Retrospective: Part 1 from 2 reviews

Posted by Alex
Don't really get this story, I feel like you didn't give us enough information for us to figure out who killed him. The story seemed to end on a weird cliffhanger, was it his parents, who knows and where was he exactly when he got killed, its to open ended for me to decide. Still the sex scene was written well.
Posted by Jared
You should write a part three explaining who the killer is and why. This was not as good as your others based on the ending. The ending to this one was super strange. I think it would have been better if you went to when he was killed without telling who the killer was. Still really good though. Keep it up with the great ideas.
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