Posted by Jake I think it should be continued so far it has a good story line....
Posted by Mike This is TOTALLY unreadable due to the poor grammar and lack of understanding of basic English that is presented by the writer. What a waste of time!!
Posted by Kevin Basic English would help for the mood of the story to be actually erotic. When it sounds like a foreigner speaking, it's a huge turnoff.
Posted by nipster hell yea continue it
Posted by anthon i would love for this story to continue, it;s really good.
After another mile of dusty road we came to another group of old unpainted building that looked like an old ghost town out of the old west. My God. I was to live here in this run down town, with nothing to do but watch for snakes and eat dust? I’ll never get away from here. I’ll be a prisoner with Jason as my jailer...