Posted by Dylan this is SO awesome I can't wait till the third part:3 I love it Kieran hehe:3
Posted by Miggy OMG! Kieran continue.. And seeing my character talking to your character made my writer's block kinda disappeared. Definitely going to work on my Part 4 now! And Thank you Kieran, thank you so much for the inspiration you give us in writing (Specifically me). Well, please continue this.. I was just a little confused at the last part.. Kindly explain it please? He chase the spirits but, I thought he was in his room? Well, please explain. And please continue, such a beautiful story!
Posted by Ryan This is SOO good Kieran I cant wait for part 3 of the story, you are a good writer.
Posted by loren please please keep going i cant wait to read about what happens with seth and why "R" is so obsessed with sammie
Posted by russ yeah nice story...but pls try not to make it long,like with so many parts,it makes it harder to keep up wit...cnt wait for nxt part...be quick!
Posted by Kieran Lee Thankyou everyone, will try and be as quick as possible with part 3. :) @Miggy- I don't understand what part you mean? He's upstairs with Jack, the house shakes, he goes downstairs to see if his parents are ok, hears noises outside and chases them down the garden. I don't think i've put that he's in his room, but if I have then my mistake. :P
Posted by Seth Its good story not like the past one ,it gets sometimes alot of....words but its interesting to read it, and by the way thanks kieran for useing my name,it means alot to me.
Posted by Austin desch Hi kieran i love ur stories and miggy i love ur stories as well i hope u check mine out and i hope u like them :3 its me and tanner part 1 and 2
Posted by Jared Hughey Please continue! Im hooked!
Posted by Shaun Raven Great story, scaring the hell out of me but I want more...
Keep writing, please...
=) x
Posted by Kieran Lee Thanks guys, next part will be up very, very soon! :)
Now that the narrator had tasted sex with Mani's wife, he goes there with expectation. What happens at Mani's house stuns him and makes him feel guilty...