Posted by Miguel Loved it cant wait for the other stories! woot beat miggy!
Posted by Nick Whoa I actually got really scared there.. This sounds like a ghost story
Posted by David Love it!!! I can't wait for the next part!! I just hope Kieran that maybe you could include more characters into the story like you did with "when I'm with you"
Posted by Miggy OMG! GAVE ME CHILLS! IN A GOOD WAY! PLEASE TRY TO DO THE LONGER VERSIONS! PLEAAAAAAAAAAASE!! :D YOUR KILLING US (ME)! LOLOLL! LOVE YOU KIERAN! THIS IS A VERY GOOD STORY!!! SWEAR!!
Posted by Jason The bit with the shadow on the balcony really reminded me of a film called insidious lol Really looking forward to reading the coming parts of this story
Posted by britt Loved It !!!, but no offence i dnt really like what Sammie looks like :/
BUT LOVE THE STORY !! 3
Posted by Seth It is amazing start.I hope to see more and more of it.
Posted by Miggy What Sammie looks like @britt is reality! Not a lot of teenages stands 6'3", with bulging muscles and has a 11 inch cock! Continue it Kieran.. Continue being a good writer and a REAL writer with REAL CHARACTERS!
Posted by Kieran Lee Aww, i'm pleased people found it! Haha. Thanks guys, i'm working on it. It just takes longer, it's much harder work than "when i'm with you" lol. :)
Posted by Miggy Well,it's okay if it's going to take longer.. i hope you make Shannon have a guest appearance like he was sammie's cousin.. *ehem* *ehem* LOL! Yeah, right I wish! Well, hope to see Sammie's Choice Part 2 :)
Posted by Kieran Lee Sure Miggy I can do that if you'd like? I mean their both redheads so I guess they could be related or something.
Posted by Arun Torrentino lol "they're both redheads so i guess they could be related", funny guy. Vivid and interesting, please continue this Mr Lee.
Posted by britt @Miggy; yeah i knoe that. !!!
Im just expressing my opions.........TOO KIERAN.
Continue the story, i mite learn to love it ha
Posted by Miggy I'd like.. :) My part 4 would be taking long.. Since my computer crashed and erased the story that I've saved for part 4. :( Now I'm wrecked!
Posted by Miggy Kieran.. I need to tell you something.. Reply back, please? :,(
Posted by Kieran Lee What is it? If it's something like personal email me lol. :)
Posted by Miggy Well, It's about my story! I'm having a writer's block! :( I don't want Shannon and Trevor to end just like that! :(( I got this whole thing for them but, it just won't transform in my head! HELP KIERAN! :(
Posted by Miggy Kieran do you have Yahoo! Messenger? Add me? :(
Posted by Miggy Please? :((
Posted by Kieran Lee Nope, only have Windows live messenger/Msn i'm afriad.
Posted by Miggy Yahoo! Can actually add people from Msn. I'll try that.. Uh, I just don't know your id.
Posted by Kieran Lee My email is on the site lol... kieran.lee8@hotmail.co.uk is my id. :)
Posted by Kevin Please please pleeeeaaassseeeee continue with "sammies choice" Kieran!! It's soo good!! I love it!!
Max bent his head and started to suck Kyle’s pierced nipple, not bothering to be gentle. Kyle groaned involuntarily, his body trembling as he felt Max’s teeth scrape of his sensitive skin. Max planted a trail of kisses down to Kyle’s waist, loving the way he could feel Kyle squirming underneath him.
Slowly, Max shifted so he was knelt between Kyle’s muscular thighs and he lightly licked the tip of his tongue up Kyle’s hard shaft...