Posted by kaell great stuff cant wait to read what happens next
Posted by joshh this is great. I love the plot and can't wait for you to continue!(:
Posted by Moses That sounds nice nd sweet
Posted by wow500 Damn! that was hot, please tell me there is more of this to come... This story really is amazing, u definatly need to write more. But what about tom's girlfriend, is that going to be the central conflict later in the story?
Posted by gary Now thats what i call spicy, plz post more my dicks still hard.
Posted by scottn thanks for the nice reviews guys :) there is part 3 already posted on agaymen.co.uk so you can go and read it there if u like , or wait untill the site fixes my acount so i can post the other parts here, thanks :)
Posted by Romeo Nice stories!
There's a lot of missing parts though. Is Tom bi-sexual and nothing is mention about his girlfriend? We know he have a girlfriend but that's all.
Make Scott more cool, he sounds like a dork. If no one know Scott is gay, why would he have sex at his house?
You might want to start to put a conflict between Scott, Tom, and his girlfriend now.
Is this a one night stand or the biginning of a true love? if it's true love, start opening up the story now.
Posted by jp awesome story! keep going