Posted by Sam I thouroughly (No idea if that was spelt correctly) enjoyed that story. It was very, very brilliant... Nice to see another NZer on here too... Almost makes me want to go to Teacher's College
Posted by Wally Well laid out story but had no surprises, too easy to guess the outcome. Hope there will be a sequel with a bit more imagination to it.
Posted by VC its thoroughly and great story but i agree with "Wally" it had no suprises but i'm waiting for the next one!!!! HINT!!! HINT!!!
Posted by Tj hey this is really good i nearly had an orgasim reading it!! i really did like it keep the storys like this one comeing sorry i cant spell if there somthing spelled wrong up there but you get the point right?