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Posted by wow500
keep up the good work
Posted by David
So I'm utterly confused at this point, but I still like it! So please, another update!
Posted by Cod
At last...Finally a new chapter...Yet no answers...Sad it'll finish in just 3 chapters...Even dipressing that Sean-Kevin killed the love-hate of his life...Or maybe not...Keep up the magnifiscent work...
Posted by mariahland
i love secrets it just made me intrested in it while i was in love with a straight guy all seemed to be messed gorgeous story
Posted by mariahland
but i want to know what happende on earth i wanna know the answer soon i cant wait dont wanna be confused at all
Posted by Ken
This has got to be one of most engrosing stories I have read on this site or any other one. There are such long time gaps between chapters that I begin to think that it will not be finished and then here comes another chapter. I'm as confused as everbody else but it is still one fine read and that why I love it. Thanks
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Posted by Reu
Congratulations! you just made my brain turn to butter! :D
Posted by gab
I just love it. The whole style makes it for me, love the concept. I'd love to see some more soon. So far, this one and Detention makes you incredibly special as a writer. I just love it!
Posted by carlson
honestly, reading a whole lot stories before and found out that only your stories satisfy what all readers need and want.I don't know why but this SECRET sequel series were even BETTER than DETENTION series sometimes. That's my opinion, cos it has more conflict, climax.Tell you something, my other staright friends were also addicted to this SECRETS series. They said it was beautiful, yet dark and somehow creepy. Sometimes, when i read this series alone in the night, that made me feel cold and creepy. I can imagine all those scenes and of course..CONFUSED, but i think that's cool cos it is so much more FANTASTIC..Can;t wait till the answers revealed..!!!
Posted by nick blake
this story was so fucking good cant wait for the next chapter all of the stories you do are great but this is the best one i think
Posted by me
Well Jeff I read this chapter like 4 years ago so I don't think there's more on the way.
Posted by Louis
The story is so confusing... Good but confusing
Posted by Trey
When does tv next on come out???
Posted by Jeff
Love yah author
Posted by Ben
is the next chapter out? im having difficulty looking for teh next chapter... is there a search tool for story titles?
Posted by Cherrie
Oh Gods in heaven!!!!!! WHENS THE NEXT STORY GONNA BE DONE!!
Posted by marvin
this story rox. please finish it
Posted by rhaf
i'm really confused n0w, i really need to read the final or ending of this story. Oh my gud, this getting so far now. I spent a lot of time to read it continuizyun. I hope he will wake from this bad dream.
Posted by Daniel
Okay so by a few weeks you mean a few years?
Posted by Andrew
Please finish this I really wanna know what happens
Posted by Jankyn
Am studying lit at vasity but even i found the story confusing for a while, i get it now. I think i see were you are going with this but ave noticed some minor inconsistency in the main plot.you seem to have forgotten that you told the story from Patricks point of view and he revealed that he was having a strong attraction to sean that he couldnt comprehend, the patrick that cames out through the rest of the story seems rather more certain of a plan that must have been put together even before chapter two...ummm. And another, perharps this is yet to be revealed. kevin mentioned to sean that he did something bad which was worse than him sleepin with Patricks dad. that if he were to remember that, sean would kill him instantly...look in to that and wen you are done. Take this to hollywood. Trust me if you dont make this into a movie you'll never make the money for it. Someone else will!
Posted by Nob
is there an end of this story?
Posted by Nico
I swear to god you need to finish this!
Posted by Ricky
Is anyone else just a little confused? I hope this series gets finished, really good read
Posted by driven04
cant wait to read the rest of the sequel!!! deym!!! i knew it!!! with all the confusion and all, someone somehow must have a mental illness. above all, i was really hooked to this, actually, all your stories. great writing mike!
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