Posted by me It's not getting boring at all. Just confusing, as usual. I thought I would just give up if it is taking so long to clear a bit, but yeah, I can wait a bit for the next chapter. =)
Posted by wow500 keep up the good work
Posted by David So I'm utterly confused at this point, but I still like it! So please, another update!
Posted by Cod At last...Finally a new chapter...Yet no answers...Sad it'll finish in just 3 chapters...Even dipressing that Sean-Kevin killed the love-hate of his life...Or maybe not...Keep up the magnifiscent work...
Posted by mariahland i love secrets it just made me intrested in it while i was in love with a straight guy all seemed to be messed gorgeous story
Posted by mariahland but i want to know what happende on earth i wanna know the answer soon i cant wait dont wanna be confused at all
Posted by Ken This has got to be one of most engrosing stories I have read on this site or any other one. There are such long time gaps between chapters that I begin to think that it will not be finished and then here comes another chapter. I'm as confused as everbody else but it is still one fine read and that why I love it. Thanks
Posted by wow500 i love that story, know that is something you should publish. But finishing it and posting the rest on the internet would be nice to!)
all the same do NOT forget about heights.
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Posted by D.G My goodness... So either Sean and Patrick aren't real and He's making everything up and Sean is really Kevin, or The whole thing with the doctor is just one big bad dream, and Sean is going to wake up beside Patrick yet again where it all began going bad... I hope thats what happens because Patrick and Sean... totally ment to be 3
Posted by Reu Congratulations! you just made my brain turn to butter! :D
Posted by Shane I've cried, gasped, and turned my face away from the monitor more times than I can count. I've read many stories on this site since I was 16, I'm now almost 19 and out of all of those stories, this is the first of which I've left a reply. I do hope you finish sooner rather than later, I fear I will have trouble sleeping from anticipation. Keep up the great work; I wish we could see more mainstream works like this.
Posted by Nick wow hahahha this is great....but I have a question....
so are sean and kevin the same person?
also, danny was killed by sen too...rite?
Posted by gab I just love it. The whole style makes it for me, love the concept. I'd love to see some more soon. So far, this one and Detention makes you incredibly special as a writer. I just love it!
Posted by D.G Uhm.. I think dude who wrote these awesome stories is like.. dead. cause like its been a while.
Posted by carlson honestly, reading a whole lot stories before and found out that only your stories satisfy what all readers need and want.I don't know why but this SECRET sequel series were even BETTER than DETENTION series sometimes. That's my opinion, cos it has more conflict, climax.Tell you something, my other staright friends were also addicted to this SECRETS series. They said it was beautiful, yet dark and somehow creepy. Sometimes, when i read this series alone in the night, that made me feel cold and creepy. I can imagine all those scenes and of course..CONFUSED, but i think that's cool cos it is so much more FANTASTIC..Can;t wait till the answers revealed..!!!
Posted by Michael Booker I'm not dead, lol. I've just been busy for a long time, working and stuff, as well as trying to write a few novels that I'm working on now. But I haven't forgotten about this story. I'm working on the next chapter now. It should be up in a couple of weeks or so. If you want to email me, my email is indigodude@aol.com. Thanks.
Posted by nick blake this story was so fucking good cant wait for the next chapter all of the stories you do are great but this is the best one i think
Posted by George Wow.
I'm really confused, but i thought that was really good. Is he in some sort of coma or something?
Posted by Jeff Just found this site and story, a real work of art, so many twists and complex story lines make a very good read, but at ch12 the story stops, is there any more??? also whats the date stamp of this story?? is it still going?? its now February 1st 2009 as I write this. hope more is under way.
Posted by me Well Jeff I read this chapter like 4 years ago so I don't think there's more on the way.
Posted by Louis The story is so confusing... Good but confusing
Posted by brandon I need to know when the next chapter is! I'm dying for it!!!!
Posted by Trey When does tv next on come out???
Posted by bob i honestly didnt expect such a suspense thriller on a gay erotica website but damn this is a brain churning story, can't wait for next chapter
Posted by Kenny Im understanding this story alot more lol u have to email me when its finished blahblahblah_245@yahoo.com :)
Posted by Jeff Love yah author
Posted by Ben is the next chapter out? im having difficulty looking for teh next chapter... is there a search tool for story titles?
Posted by Cherrie Oh Gods in heaven!!!!!! WHENS THE NEXT STORY GONNA BE DONE!!
Posted by Manu It was the best ever thing I have seen in writing.
Everything is perfect.
But please continue the story.
Posted by Gary Please don't let us down...Finish the story..I have spent a lot time reading this fasinating story please have mercy and bring it to its' final end.
Thanks for great writing and excitment.
Posted by Jnan This story is quite intriguing and amusing, the suspense and twists never stop coming, making you imagine so many outcomes and possibilities. So are the details and descriptions, they never left any doubt in my mind about the environment. This might inspire me to post some of my stories up here as well. Michael you are very gifted as a writer and I congratulate you, just make sure that you finish the stories in a timely manner in order to maintain your audience.
Posted by marvin this story rox. please finish it
Posted by j Holy Fuck! PLEASE FINISH!!! I CAN'T WAIT 2 READ THE ENDING! I'M SITTING HERE LIKE I'M WAITING FOR THE FINAL HARRY POTTER BOOK TO COME OUT! YOU ARE THE ONLY AUTHOR I'VE LEFT COMMENTS FOR. YOU'RE AWESOME AND I HOPE YOU FIND THE TIME TO READ ALL THESE COMMENTS AND FINSIH THIS SERIES AND ALSO DESTINY. I WAS REALLY GETTING INTO THAT ONE TOO. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THESE STORIES. THEY'RE TOO GOOD TO GO UNFINISHED!!!!
Posted by J Sorry, I just have to say this, but what I really really like about this series is that you sound like you did your homework when it comes to the mental disorders, or maybe lack thereof, that Sean/Kevin has. And this story is getting to me just like the book Shutter Island. I'd like to know if you drew any inspiration from that story? Such an amazing story so far. Please finish it soon! Thank you.
Posted by rhaf i'm really confused n0w, i really need to read the final or ending of this story. Oh my gud, this getting so far now. I spent a lot of time to read it continuizyun. I hope he will wake from this bad dream.
Posted by Daniel Okay so by a few weeks you mean a few years?
Posted by Andrew Please finish this I really wanna know what happens
Posted by Jankyn Am studying lit at vasity but even i found the story confusing for a while, i get it now. I think i see were you are going with this but ave noticed some minor inconsistency in the main plot.you seem to have forgotten that you told the story from Patricks point of view and he revealed that he was having a strong attraction to sean that he couldnt comprehend, the patrick that cames out through the rest of the story seems rather more certain of a plan that must have been put together even before chapter two...ummm. And another, perharps this is yet to be revealed. kevin mentioned to sean that he did something bad which was worse than him sleepin with Patricks dad. that if he were to remember that, sean would kill him instantly...look in to that and wen you are done. Take this to hollywood. Trust me if you dont make this into a movie you'll never make the money for it. Someone else will!
Posted by Nob is there an end of this story?
Posted by Nico I swear to god you need to finish this!
Posted by Ricky Is anyone else just a little confused? I hope this series gets finished, really good read
Posted by driven04 cant wait to read the rest of the sequel!!! deym!!! i knew it!!! with all the confusion and all, someone somehow must have a mental illness. above all, i was really hooked to this, actually, all your stories. great writing mike!
Posted by raquel Does anyone know if this story was ever finished? I'm dying to know the end!! Oh and as I write this uts May 22, 2011...
Posted by Dan Dear Michael,
This is Dan and I have just finished Secrets. Is Secrets 12 the end or is there a Secrets 13? The story was magnifacent and kept my interest throughout. I would say it was better then Dentention. I would say I enjoy reading your stories.
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